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Paint With Fire

Paint With Fire Paint flies freely from his brush As he paints he sees her blush In both their eyes passion burns Naked she poses her body turns Temptation irresistible for her he yearns With his brush he paints her red In all her glory there on his bed Textured skin a canvas extreme Heaving, writhing, an artist's dream Fire flows from his finger tips In all her curves, his passion drips Transformed into a work of art Eternal pleasures, light and dark For Andrea's Acrostic Contest. I also used the first word in each stanza to spell out the title.

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/30/2014 8:22:00 PM

Just now found this very fine write my friend. I see it won as it should. Every freakin' stanza is great.. A true smasher for sure!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2014 9:08:00 AM

Thanks so much for your visits Robert.

Fate Dictates

Date: 7/25/2014 4:52:00 PM

I love the gentle flow of this and wanted more!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2014 9:09:00 AM

If I gave to much more I might get in trouble *lol*.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/21/2014 10:20:00 PM

I enjoyed the uniqueness of this passionate and beautiful acrostic poem. Very nicely written and rhymed! Congratulations on your win, Richard! I think this should have placed a bit higher, though...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2014 11:17:00 PM

Thanks Kelly, I appreciate the vote of confidence.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/20/2014 12:31:00 PM

Richard......you did so well. I'm proud of you. Congrats.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 12:59:00 PM

Richard..please check your soup mail and get back to me

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2014 12:49:00 PM

It didn't place very high but I am pleased with the poem and dispite my grammatical error Andrea still added it to the list of winners.

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 7/19/2014 2:39:00 PM

Goodness I loved this one, very sensual. Congratulations on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/20/2014 12:50:00 PM

Thanks A.E. what do the initials stand for???

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/18/2014 10:27:00 PM

Hey sugar, great to see ya on the winners list :) cheers!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:16:00 AM

Thanks Casarah.

David Mohn

Date: 7/18/2014 7:34:00 PM

Hi Richard, I really like your original take on this...congrats...thanks for the comments on mine as well

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:16:00 AM

My pleasure David,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:29:00 PM

well done..>PD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/19/2014 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/18/2014 9:53:00 AM

Congratulations, Richard. Well done!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Faye.

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2014 8:36:00 AM

Congrats on a great win ...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 9:11:00 AM

Thanks Joseph

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/18/2014 7:13:00 AM

Flys/ flies..oh well, I think this is great.. this is very "stimulating"..lol. congrats. BG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your kindness.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/18/2014 7:10:00 AM

Wow! You paint with passion my friend! Congrats on a great win dear Richard! Hugs.. Arlene

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 8:08:00 AM

Thanks Arlene. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2014 1:15:00 AM

N that lil luck really favoured Richard! Back again wid big congrats! If u ask me truly it didn't need luck at all,, is a sure n top winner!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 8:10:00 AM

;0) you are sweet!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2014 11:50:00 PM

I love how you did this with the first word in each stanza spelling out the title as well, Richard!!! This paints a passionate picture, which I wanted to place higher but it bugged me that you spelled the word flys instead of flies. Congrats. I really like your poem.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/18/2014 8:57:00 PM

thanks for showing me this, Richard. Some other judges also go by spelling rules, so if I had a weakness, I would ask a friend to proof a poem for me in a contest with spelling rules. Do you have a pen mate that can check those things for you? I was not leaving off my list good poems that had one or two errors. The ones at the top of my list truly were my favorites in both their writing style and in what they had to say. I have read some poems of yours that touched both my mind AND my soul very deeply. 'sorry if I offended you with my comment. I've always enjoyed your poetry.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 8:07:00 AM

That's unfortunate, if you read my book Dummy Hurting and Healing Words you might have a better understanding. There are certain words that regardless of how many times I use them my brain doesn't connect the dots. If not for the kindness of friends, a number of my poems would contain errors. My hope is that people can see beyond the technical and see into my heart.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/12/2014 4:48:00 PM

Love your second stanza Richard!!! Very artistic and poetic..:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/18/2014 8:16:00 AM

Sorry, I somehow missed this comment, thanks so much Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 4:49:00 PM

I want to add the fire in your paint is blaring hot!!!

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 6:23:00 PM

Whoa, Richard, made me blush too. This one should do well in the contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/9/2014 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Faye.

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/8/2014 1:25:00 PM

This is a Masterful work of passion and Poetry Richard. I commend you. "Textured skin, a canvas extreme...Eternal pleasures from light to dark..." This art is sexy, smart, and also speaks of consequence, its awesome my friend. J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2014 2:02:00 PM

Your kindness is appreciated.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/8/2014 1:26:00 PM

A FAV. J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2014 11:33:00 PM

Wow, a very steamy acrostic befitting the title Richard! I kind of went the other way with mine about Earth. I guess it is the state of mind I am in right now. A truly great write and entry Richard. It should do fantastic in the contest!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2014 8:39:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I enjoyed your take on the contest as well. Viva la differance.