Richard Lamoureux Poet Acrostic

Paint With Fire

Paint With Fire

Paint flies freely from his brush 
As he paints he sees her blush
In both their eyes passion burns
Naked she poses her body turns
Temptation irresistible for her he yearns

With his brush he paints her red
In all her glory there on his bed
Textured skin a canvas extreme
Heaving, writhing, an artist's dream

Fire flows from his finger tips
In all her curves, his passion drips
Transformed into a work of art
Eternal pleasures, light and dark

For Andrea's Acrostic Contest. 
I also used the first word in each stanza to spell out the title.

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Robert Lindley July 30, 2014 at 8:22 PM Just now found this very fine write my friend. I see it won as it should. Every freakin' stanza is great.. A true smasher for sure!!!!! Richard Lamoureux July 31, 2014 at 9:08 AM Thanks so much for your visits Robert.

Fate Dictates July 25, 2014 at 4:52 PM I love the gentle flow of this and wanted more!! Richard Lamoureux July 31, 2014 at 9:09 AM If I gave to much more I might get in trouble *lol*.

Kelly Deschler July 21, 2014 at 10:20 PM I enjoyed the uniqueness of this passionate and beautiful acrostic poem. Very nicely written and rhymed! Congratulations on your win, Richard! I think this should have placed a bit higher, though... Richard Lamoureux July 21, 2014 at 11:17 PM Thanks Kelly, I appreciate the vote of confidence.

Eileen Manassian July 20, 2014 at 12:31 PM Richard......you did so well. I'm proud of you. Congrats. Eileen Manassian July 20, 2014 at 12:59 PM Richard..please check your soup mail and get back to me Richard Lamoureux July 20, 2014 at 12:49 PM It didn't place very high but I am pleased with the poem and dispite my grammatical error Andrea still added it to the list of winners.

A.E. Rivenbark July 19, 2014 at 2:39 PM Goodness I loved this one, very sensual. Congratulations on your win! Richard Lamoureux July 20, 2014 at 12:50 PM Thanks A.E. what do the initials stand for???

Casarah Nance July 18, 2014 at 10:27 PM Hey sugar, great to see ya on the winners list :) cheers! Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:16 AM Thanks Casarah.

David Mohn July 18, 2014 at 7:34 PM Hi Richard, I really like your original take on this...congrats...thanks for the comments on mine as well Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:16 AM My pleasure David,

Poet Destroyer A July 18, 2014 at 2:29 PM well done..>PD Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2014 at 9:17 AM Thanks Linda.

Faye Gibson July 18, 2014 at 9:53 AM Congratulations, Richard. Well done! Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 10:00 AM Thanks Faye.

Joseph May July 18, 2014 at 8:36 AM Congrats on a great win ... Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 9:11 AM Thanks Joseph

Barbara Gorelick July 18, 2014 at 7:13 AM Flys/ flies..oh well, I think this is great.. this is very "stimulating"..lol. congrats. BG Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:09 AM Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your kindness.

Arlene Smith July 18, 2014 at 7:10 AM Wow! You paint with passion my friend! Congrats on a great win dear Richard! Hugs.. Arlene Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:08 AM Thanks Arlene. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 1:15 AM N that lil luck really favoured Richard! Back again wid big congrats! If u ask me truly it didn't need luck at all,, is a sure n top winner!! Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:10 AM ;0) you are sweet!

Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2014 at 11:50 PM I love how you did this with the first word in each stanza spelling out the title as well, Richard!!! This paints a passionate picture, which I wanted to place higher but it bugged me that you spelled the word flys instead of flies. Congrats. I really like your poem. Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2014 at 8:57 PM thanks for showing me this, Richard. Some other judges also go by spelling rules, so if I had a weakness, I would ask a friend to proof a poem for me in a contest with spelling rules. Do you have a pen mate that can check those things for you? I was not leaving off my list good poems that had one or two errors. The ones at the top of my list truly were my favorites in both their writing style and in what they had to say. I have read some poems of yours that touched both my mind AND my soul very deeply. 'sorry if I offended you with my comment. I've always enjoyed your poetry. Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:07 AM That's unfortunate, if you read my book Dummy Hurting and Healing Words you might have a better understanding. There are certain words that regardless of how many times I use them my brain doesn't connect the dots. If not for the kindness of friends, a number of my poems would contain errors. My hope is that people can see beyond the technical and see into my heart.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 4:48 PM Love your second stanza Richard!!! Very artistic and poetic..:) Richard Lamoureux July 18, 2014 at 8:16 AM Sorry, I somehow missed this comment, thanks so much Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 4:49 PM I want to add the fire in your paint is blaring hot!!!

Faye Gibson July 8, 2014 at 6:23 PM Whoa, Richard, made me blush too. This one should do well in the contest. Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2014 at 8:18 AM Thanks Faye.

Justin Bordner July 8, 2014 at 1:25 PM This is a Masterful work of passion and Poetry Richard. I commend you. "Textured skin, a canvas extreme...Eternal pleasures from light to dark..." This art is sexy, smart, and also speaks of consequence, its awesome my friend. J.A.B. Richard Lamoureux July 8, 2014 at 2:02 PM Your kindness is appreciated. Justin Bordner July 8, 2014 at 1:26 PM A FAV. J.A.B.

Connie Marcum Wong July 5, 2014 at 11:33 PM Wow, a very steamy acrostic befitting the title Richard! I kind of went the other way with mine about Earth. I guess it is the state of mind I am in right now. A truly great write and entry Richard. It should do fantastic in the contest! Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 8:39 AM Thanks Connie, I enjoyed your take on the contest as well. Viva la differance.

Shadow Hamilton July 5, 2014 at 6:38 PM this has everything Rick a wow of an acrostic gl in contest should fly hugs Richard Lamoureux July 6, 2014 at 8:40 AM Hi Shadow, thanks. I'm on my way to see what new poems you have written.

Joseph May July 4, 2014 at 7:46 PM A work of art indeed...well done Richard Lamoureux July 5, 2014 at 7:38 AM Thanks Joseph.

Casarah Nance July 4, 2014 at 3:17 PM Alright I'll comment after I take a cold shower.... wowee I'd give ya top prize for that one ! :) Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2014 at 3:24 PM Maybe you can put a good word in with the judge for me. ;0)

Verlena S. Walker July 4, 2014 at 2:06 PM Very nice Rick... This should win easily a 1st placement for you... Verlena Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2014 at 3:22 PM You are kind, I hope you are right.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 4, 2014 at 12:48 PM Extremely passionate Richard ! A sure winner it wud be ! Gl in contest ! Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2014 at 3:21 PM A little luck is always appreciated.

Eileen Manassian July 4, 2014 at 10:12 AM One of your absolute best, Richard. I have missed your writes on love and passion. This...This is why you are Lamoureux. A favorite. I'm stunned. Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2014 at 3:20 PM So glad you enjoyed it Eileen. I had fun imagining this one.

Tim Smith July 4, 2014 at 9:29 AM Sultry and hot. Full of passion. Painted from the longing heart. Splendidly done my friend. Richard Lamoureux July 4, 2014 at 9:30 AM Thanks Tim.

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