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Paint Her

There stands the painter upon his hill
His wife is gone but not his skill

On each and every rainy day
He hunkers down for an outdoor stay

A woodpile serves him as his chair 
From which he casts his longing stare

Slowly the brush does touch the paint
As he pictures his departed saint 

Quickening strokes all each knowing
His eyes now closed the paint a flowing

The colors before him come to life
The strokes reveal his teary wife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/26/2023 5:07:00 PM
Dear Jerry, the sad beauty of your poem reaches the depths of my heart. A lovely, melancholy portrait of lost love painted by your gifted poetic pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 1/27/2023 12:41:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words
Date: 10/21/2018 8:49:00 PM
Lovely, Jerry. Congrats on your top win.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/25/2018 3:26:00 AM
Thanks Line
Date: 10/20/2018 3:40:00 PM
I love this heartfelt moving piece Jerry. Congratulations on your first placement!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 10/20/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, I just hope it doesn't rain tomorrow

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