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Pains' Joy

Whistle in the wind, hum to the trees, Life is always on the run, as evasive as the breeze. There is often smoke smoldering in the heart, But we have got to seek fire if we are not to fall apart. Surrendering your passion is to lock yourself in jail, Just as to be untrue is to live a personal hell. Life deals merely a portion of the whole of eternity; You may blow off living, but it takes you seriously. Feelings must be felt to the brim of the soul Or truth cannot touch you and enable you to grow. When you fall down, feel all of the pain. When you are depressed, let yourself rain. If sorrow is a stranger, joy cannot be your friend, For they walk hand in hand seeking the same end. If you never felt empty, how could joy fill you again? If you never lost, would it feel as good to win? If pain never met you and put you on trial, How could you ever truly appreciate a smile? 9-3-15

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Date: 2/27/2019 12:12:00 AM
truly written-Life deals merely a portion of the whole of eternity;/ You may blow off living, but it takes you seriously./// well done, great work
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Date: 11/11/2017 4:10:00 PM
Profound in every stanza! Right you are.. Thank you my friend!
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Date: 8/3/2016 11:58:00 AM
Beautiful write CayCay...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 7/30/2016 8:44:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest --- 101 in a row. :) Stop by my blog "They Hang Horses, Don't They?" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/9/2015 7:10:00 PM
Yes, this poem is so beautiful, to the point, and so true. Keep up the positive work! In response to my poem "I forgive." I put the word "need" to demonstrate the extremity of the individuals' behavior. In other words, the chaotic behavior is like there is a strange driving force that is building that attitude thus "why is there the need".....
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Date: 9/4/2015 10:40:00 PM
This is a brilliant piece Cay Cay, it's true that trials build our strength and character and you are right about never surrendering your passion. My ex once tore up many pages of my poetry because it was all foolishness. Well guess what the poems live on and she's gone. You just can't destroy the gift God gave you. Blessings Carl
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:40:00 AM
A 'friend' once destroyed a large portion of my poetry. I am glad to hear you were able to retrieve yours because it is losing a part of you. Forgive my tardiness in telling you how much I appreciate your comments ... CayCay
Date: 9/3/2015 6:01:00 PM
CayCay, this is deep... it's true what you wrote above. If sorrow is a stranger, then joy and I can't be friends. Life is full of ups and downs, I can't imagine life with either one.... ENJOYED... LINDA
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:38:00 AM
Hi, Linda. Something must have distracted me on 9-3. I cannot believe I left you lingering here without a reply. My bad - I am regretful, but thankful for your input. I always like to hear from you ... CayCay
Date: 9/3/2015 3:12:00 PM
Beautifully said, CayCay.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/17/2015 8:36:00 AM
I'm late, I'm late for a very important date! It is way past the date when I should have told you how much I appreciate your comment. I'm not sure how I missed something that means so much. Thank you ... CayCay
Date: 9/3/2015 10:37:00 AM
Life experiences, that you write about, CayCay, help us to grow. Thanks for pointing that out in your poem. Also, when we go through a trial, we are then able to help others go through their trials because we have been there. Also, your poem has a beautiful ending. Smile, and the world smiles with you. A 7. ~~~Darlene
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/3/2015 10:45:00 AM
Yes and yes, I agree. Thank you for your thoughts. So happy to see you here ... CayCay

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