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Pain All Gone Mr Dentist

I knocked tbe door hands were shaking
just come in ... my knees were quaking
keeled over in a huddle
looked up.... I need a cuddle
my dentist asked...teeth are aching

no I replied pain is no more
open wide let me just make sure
quickly he taps the molar
right out of chair i did soar
straight across room and out the door.


penned 12 January 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/15/2019 2:14:00 PM
Hello Seren, that is a good way to leave the dentist chair. Have a nice day my friend.
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