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Pain

You won't know how I feel,
What I do,
What I want.
 
Because in everything I do,
You're too Blind to see the Truth.
 
Sometimes it makes me wonder,
It makes me wonder why I can't be them,
Why can't I?
 
I want you to try and take my Place,
I want you to feel the pain I feel,
I want you to get hurt the way I got hurt,
I want you to Feel all the feelings I felt.
 
I want to see Blood on your Body,
I want to see you suffer in Pain,
I want to see you in hell with Lucifer down there.
 
I tried to hide it,
I tried to pretend,
but then everything has it's End.
 
All the feelings I felt towards you Vanished,
like a witch as wicked,
Like Hearts that Breaks into a Billion of Pieces.
 
You won't have the senses,
to know I'm Physically and Mentally Broken,
Why?
because you're not in my Place to feel my Pain
 
You should see how my Tears Dried
and how my Heart Died.

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Skat A May 6, 2014 at 2:18 PM ha I like the poetic name... however, it is a sad poem... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2014 at 12:33 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, P.I.P.:) - I choose your first very well and sad written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 6:31 AM to emphatize.. to be on one's shoes.. what a compassionate and endearing write you have here.. :) IM glad that i read two of your first poems here.. :) Welcome to the Poetrysoup family i hope you will have a great time like I am.. :) as how beautiful are the poems here, the persons behind them are a wow too.. :) God bless, olive eloisa here and hope we can be friends.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 5, 2014 at 2:52 AM This is deep and wonderful, Pretend, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ayesha Karim May 4, 2014 at 9:07 PM Awesome poem man! Good affect and good emotion throughout.