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Pain

from the limpid pools of her eyes, hot drops run down her swollen red cheeks — quivering, breaking, burning every fiber of her heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 3/31/2022 7:58:00 AM
Oh! Oh!! Sad to be broken hearted. I enjoyed reading this one filled with emotion. Very creative. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2022 8:22:00 PM
Whoa! What an intensely felt poem, Valsa. Big impact on me. Thanks, gw
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Date: 2/28/2022 5:16:00 PM
I can actually feel all the emotions poured out from within this fractured heart. Intense Valsa!...ab
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Date: 2/28/2022 4:13:00 PM
A poignant tanka on heartaches, Valsa, great penning my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 2/28/2022 3:55:00 PM
Oh, this is enchantingly sad. Deeply conveyed my friend.
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Date: 2/28/2022 11:24:00 AM
so sad, incredibly sad.
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Date: 2/28/2022 10:24:00 AM
Too bad tears do not wash the pain away! Well said, Valsa! Aloha!
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Date: 2/28/2022 9:50:00 AM
Powerful words to externalize some of the inner pain, but nothing is worth your tears, dear friend. I apologize if I miss some of your wonderful work because I'm traveling and have limited coverage. With best regards
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Date: 2/28/2022 7:50:00 AM
Those hot tears give way. Without them we might explode. Excellent tanka!
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Date: 2/28/2022 5:49:00 AM
Hi Valsa, You expressed the pain so well that I felt it. Well done. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 2/28/2022 5:15:00 AM
I felt the force of emotions--well expressed, Valsa.
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Date: 2/28/2022 3:40:00 AM
I feel your pain in this poem. Excellent choice of words. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/28/2022 2:01:00 AM
A nice tanka on sorrow.
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