Pain

You arrive with little or no notice,
on the well-worn path to my door,
sometimes sending a private messenger
to forewarn your arrival.

Creativity ceases in your presence
when strength is sucked 
from the well of thought.

Demands, that cannot be met,
are made in your name.

Productivity ceases.

Anger attempts intervention
but fails like a voice
that cannot be heard.

Tolerance offers her support
and is embraced for a time,
but wears out like an old sleeve.

When health fails and I leave this place
you will find me no more.

Birds will sing when
weeds cover the dusty path.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Nicole Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:23 PM
It sounds like someone is thinking about themselves, and not others. The pain!! Very sad indeed, when this happens. Your thoughts always touch all emotions of the heart. ~ Brandy
Nicole Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 9:22 PM
Your words could hold two different meanings. To me, anyway. I understand your meaning behind this. I feel for those is pain. I am thankful that you are not in pain. ~ Brandy
Greene Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 8:50 PM
When people have pain, it is difficult to think of anything else. It stifles and controls. I'm thankful that I'm pain free almost all the time, and feel sad about those with chronic pain.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 8:19 AM
This is really good. An excellent poem.
Greene Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Maureen. I'm sure anyone who has experienced pain can relate.
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