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Pain

You arrive with little or no notice, on the well-worn path to my door, sometimes sending a private messenger to forewarn your arrival. Creativity ceases in your presence when strength is sucked from the well of thought. Demands, that cannot be met, are made in your name. Productivity ceases. Anger attempts intervention but fails like a voice that cannot be heard. Tolerance offers her support and is embraced for a time, but wears out like an old sleeve. When health fails and I leave this place you will find me no more. Birds will sing when weeds cover the dusty path.

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Date: 1/18/2019 7:23:00 PM
It sounds like someone is thinking about themselves, and not others. The pain!! Very sad indeed, when this happens. Your thoughts always touch all emotions of the heart. ~ Brandy
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/18/2019 9:22:00 PM
Your words could hold two different meanings. To me, anyway. I understand your meaning behind this. I feel for those is pain. I am thankful that you are not in pain. ~ Brandy
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Gerald Greene
Date: 1/18/2019 8:50:00 PM
When people have pain, it is difficult to think of anything else. It stifles and controls. I'm thankful that I'm pain free almost all the time, and feel sad about those with chronic pain.
Date: 1/18/2019 8:19:00 AM
This is really good. An excellent poem.
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Gerald Greene
Date: 1/18/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Maureen. I'm sure anyone who has experienced pain can relate.

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