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Teasing twining thoughts as you glance upon my face;
while I'm placed beside your pen, a special creative place

Thoughts pool with emotions in your unspoken heart
While shadowed dreams advance, cryptic utterance start

Embracing passion and gleaning of your poetic glimmer,
leaving layers of footprints upon woven navigable river

Succumb to the fragments of moonlight gazing through the blind,
you rise and turn, swiftly depart, leaving me unfinished behind


5/23/2017


Poetry Contest; Form P - 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings  

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/6/2017 8:32:00 PM
This is beautiful, Eve! Congrats to you
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Date: 6/6/2017 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Eve. This is lovely! : )
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Connie ~*
Date: 6/5/2017 3:52:00 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Constance, so very honored ~*
Date: 6/3/2017 1:21:00 PM
An interesting write, Eve, one which I have certainly experienced and to which I can relate. Congrats on your well-deserved win. :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Carole ~*
Date: 6/3/2017 9:54:00 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Alexis~*
Date: 6/3/2017 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Joseph ~*
Date: 6/2/2017 2:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest, Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Carol ~*
Date: 6/2/2017 1:57:00 PM
Haunting pages expressed well. Congrats on your high placement.
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Date: 6/6/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Janis ~*
Date: 5/25/2017 10:28:00 PM
oh Eve, you chose same topic and form as I did!! I love this. (mine is not posted yet but will be within a day or too probably) WELL DONE.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.. good luck ~*
Date: 5/25/2017 5:03:00 PM
Beautifully done Eve..A7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM
Thank you the compliment and the 7 , Joseph, ~*
Date: 5/25/2017 3:48:00 PM
Nicely Done ... good luck
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Pashang ~*
Date: 5/25/2017 2:27:00 PM
WOW! This deserves more than the 7 I am giving it! Excellent submission for the contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/25/2017 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much the compliment and the 7, Pandita~*
Date: 5/25/2017 10:18:00 AM
Excellent personification, Eve, this is a sure winner, a 7+++:)
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Date: 5/25/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thank you, Jo, for the compliment and the 7 ~*
Date: 5/24/2017 12:10:00 PM
ohh, this is stunning, eve.. i enjoyed how you conceptualized this..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, Nette,~*
Date: 5/24/2017 12:00:00 PM
I love the personification very much. The word play and images are quite nice.
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 5/25/2017 2:45:00 AM
It was certainly so kind of you to have taken the trouble to check out those poems, Eve. Thnx and hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Nair, I did go to the web-site your poems are published.. www.ekphrastic.net, congratulations ...
Date: 5/23/2017 5:40:00 PM
Love this personification Eve :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Carol ~*
Date: 5/23/2017 4:52:00 PM
I thought I commented on this earlier but I guess the soup gremlin got me. I really enjoyed this Eve. I can relate to this so much. Very nicely done.
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM
Well i'm glad you came back. Thank you Chris..
Date: 5/23/2017 4:09:00 PM
The muse does seem to have a will of it's own. Love the poem, Mrs Eve:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, glad to see you around and hopingly well.. Hugs sweet friend ~*
Date: 5/23/2017 4:05:00 PM
love this clever personification
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jack, nice to see you and Daniel up above you :)
Date: 5/23/2017 3:08:00 PM
lovely personification and alliteration Eve:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 4:18:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady.... Hugs