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Teasing twining thoughts as you glance upon my face;
while I'm placed beside your pen, a special creative place

Thoughts pool with emotions in your unspoken heart
While shadowed dreams advance, cryptic utterance start

Embracing passion and gleaning of your poetic glimmer,
leaving layers of footprints upon woven navigable river

Succumb to the fragments of moonlight gazing through the blind,
you rise and turn, swiftly depart, leaving me unfinished behind


5/23/2017


Poetry Contest; Form P - 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2017

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White Wolf Date: 6/6/2017 8:32:00 PM This is beautiful, Eve! Congrats to you Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/6/2017 6:39:00 PM Congratulations on your top win Eve. This is lovely! : ) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:14:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations , Connie ~*

Constance La France Date: 6/5/2017 3:52:00 PM Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations , Constance, so very honored ~*

Carole Duet Date: 6/3/2017 1:21:00 PM An interesting write, Eve, one which I have certainly experienced and to which I can relate. Congrats on your well-deserved win. :) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Carole ~*

Alexis Y. Date: 6/3/2017 9:54:00 AM Hi Eve, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations , Alexis~*

Joseph May Date: 6/3/2017 9:45:00 AM Congrats on a fine win Eve Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:12:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Joseph ~*

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 6/2/2017 1:57:00 PM Haunting pages expressed well. Congrats on your high placement. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 6/6/2017 7:11:00 PM Thank you so much for the congratulations , Janis ~*

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/25/2017 10:28:00 PM oh Eve, you chose same topic and form as I did!! I love this. (mine is not posted yet but will be within a day or too probably) WELL DONE. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM Thank you so much, Andrea.. good luck ~*

Joseph May Date: 5/25/2017 5:03:00 PM Beautifully done Eve..A7 Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM Thank you the compliment and the 7 , Joseph, ~*

Pashang Salehi Date: 5/25/2017 3:48:00 PM Nicely Done ... good luck Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 10:53:00 PM Thank you so much, Pashang ~*

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/25/2017 2:27:00 PM WOW! This deserves more than the 7 I am giving it! Excellent submission for the contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 10:55:00 PM Thank you so much the compliment and the 7, Pandita~*

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/25/2017 10:18:00 AM Excellent personification, Eve, this is a sure winner, a 7+++:) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/25/2017 10:56:00 PM Thank you, Jo, for the compliment and the 7 ~*

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/24/2017 12:10:00 PM ohh, this is stunning, eve.. i enjoyed how you conceptualized this..huggs Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM Thank you, Nette,~*

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 5/24/2017 12:00:00 PM I love the personification very much. The word play and images are quite nice. Login to Reply S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 5/25/2017 2:45:00 AM It was certainly so kind of you to have taken the trouble to check out those poems, Eve. Thnx and hugs! Eve Roper Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM Thank you so very much, Nair, I did go to the web-site your poems are published.. www.ekphrastic.net, congratulations ...

Carol B. Date: 5/23/2017 5:40:00 PM Love this personification Eve :) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM Thank you, Carol ~*

Chris Green Date: 5/23/2017 4:52:00 PM I thought I commented on this earlier but I guess the soup gremlin got me. I really enjoyed this Eve. I can relate to this so much. Very nicely done. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM Well i'm glad you came back. Thank you Chris..

Daniel Turner Date: 5/23/2017 4:09:00 PM The muse does seem to have a will of it's own. Love the poem, Mrs Eve:) Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2017 4:19:00 PM Thank you, Daniel, glad to see you around and hopingly well.. Hugs sweet friend ~*

Jack Horne Date: 5/23/2017 4:05:00 PM love this clever personification Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2017 4:18:00 PM Thank you, Jack, nice to see you and Daniel up above you :)

Jan Allison Date: 5/23/2017 3:08:00 PM lovely personification and alliteration Eve:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 5/23/2017 4:18:00 PM Thank you sweet lady.... Hugs