Page By Page

Teasing twining thoughts as you glance upon my face;
while I'm placed beside your pen, a special creative place

Thoughts pool with emotions in your unspoken heart
While shadowed dreams advance, cryptic utterance start

Embracing passion and gleaning of your poetic glimmer,
leaving layers of footprints upon woven navigable river

Succumb to the fragments of moonlight gazing through the blind,
you rise and turn, swiftly depart, leaving me unfinished behind


5/23/2017


Poetry Contest; Form P - 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 8:32 PM
This is beautiful, Eve! Congrats to you
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your top win Eve. This is lovely! : )
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Connie ~*
La France Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:52 PM
Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Constance, so very honored ~*
Duet Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 1:21 PM
An interesting write, Eve, one which I have certainly experienced and to which I can relate. Congrats on your well-deserved win. :)
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Carole ~*
Y. Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Alexis~*
May Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Joseph ~*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 2, 2017 at 1:57 PM
Haunting pages expressed well. Congrats on your high placement.
Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Thank you so much for the congratulations , Janis ~*
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:28 PM
oh Eve, you chose same topic and form as I did!! I love this. (mine is not posted yet but will be within a day or too probably) WELL DONE.
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.. good luck ~*
May Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Beautifully done Eve..A7
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:54 PM
Thank you the compliment and the 7 , Joseph, ~*
Salehi Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 3:48 PM
Nicely Done ... good luck
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Thank you so much, Pashang ~*
Sietesantos Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 2:27 PM
WOW! This deserves more than the 7 I am giving it! Excellent submission for the contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:55 PM
Thank you so much the compliment and the 7, Pandita~*
Daniel Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Excellent personification, Eve, this is a sure winner, a 7+++:)
Roper Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 10:56 PM
Thank you, Jo, for the compliment and the 7 ~*
Onclaud Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 12:10 PM
ohh, this is stunning, eve.. i enjoyed how you conceptualized this..huggs
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Thank you, Nette,~*
Nair Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 12:00 PM
I love the personification very much. The word play and images are quite nice.
Nair Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 2:45 AM
It was certainly so kind of you to have taken the trouble to check out those poems, Eve. Thnx and hugs!
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Thank you so very much, Nair, I did go to the web-site your poems are published.. www.ekphrastic.net, congratulations ...
B. Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Love this personification Eve :)
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, Carol ~*
Green Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:52 PM
I thought I commented on this earlier but I guess the soup gremlin got me. I really enjoyed this Eve. I can relate to this so much. Very nicely done.
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 6:04 PM
Well i'm glad you came back. Thank you Chris..
Turner Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:09 PM
The muse does seem to have a will of it's own. Love the poem, Mrs Eve:)
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:19 PM
Thank you, Daniel, glad to see you around and hopingly well.. Hugs sweet friend ~*
Horne Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:05 PM
love this clever personification
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Jack, nice to see you and Daniel up above you :)
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 3:08 PM
lovely personification and alliteration Eve:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:18 PM
Thank you sweet lady.... Hugs
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