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Teasing twining thoughts as you glance upon my face; while I'm placed beside your pen, a special creative place Thoughts pool with emotions in your unspoken heart While shadowed dreams advance, cryptic utterance start Embracing passion and gleaning of your poetic glimmer, leaving layers of footprints upon woven navigable river Succumb to the fragments of moonlight gazing through the blind, you rise and turn, swiftly depart, leaving me unfinished behind 5/23/2017 Poetry Contest; Form P - Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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White Wolf

Date: 6/6/2017 8:32:00 PM

This is beautiful, Eve! Congrats to you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/6/2017 6:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your top win Eve. This is lovely! : )

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations , Connie ~*

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2017 3:52:00 PM

Eve congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations , Constance, so very honored ~*

Carole Duet

Date: 6/3/2017 1:21:00 PM

An interesting write, Eve, one which I have certainly experienced and to which I can relate. Congrats on your well-deserved win. :)

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Carole ~*

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/3/2017 9:54:00 AM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations , Alexis~*

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2017 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations ,Joseph ~*

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 6/2/2017 1:57:00 PM

Haunting pages expressed well. Congrats on your high placement.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/6/2017 7:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for the congratulations , Janis ~*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2017 10:28:00 PM

oh Eve, you chose same topic and form as I did!! I love this. (mine is not posted yet but will be within a day or too probably) WELL DONE.

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea.. good luck ~*

Joseph May

Date: 5/25/2017 5:03:00 PM

Beautifully done Eve..A7

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:54:00 PM

Thank you the compliment and the 7 , Joseph, ~*

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/25/2017 3:48:00 PM

Nicely Done ... good luck

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pashang ~*

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/25/2017 2:27:00 PM

WOW! This deserves more than the 7 I am giving it! Excellent submission for the contest! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:55:00 PM

Thank you so much the compliment and the 7, Pandita~*

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/25/2017 10:18:00 AM

Excellent personification, Eve, this is a sure winner, a 7+++:)

Eve Roper
Date: 5/25/2017 10:56:00 PM

Thank you, Jo, for the compliment and the 7 ~*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2017 12:10:00 PM

ohh, this is stunning, eve.. i enjoyed how you conceptualized this..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thank you, Nette,~*

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/24/2017 12:00:00 PM

I love the personification very much. The word play and images are quite nice.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 5/25/2017 2:45:00 AM

It was certainly so kind of you to have taken the trouble to check out those poems, Eve. Thnx and hugs!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/24/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Nair, I did go to the web-site your poems are published.. www.ekphrastic.net, congratulations ...

Carol B.

Date: 5/23/2017 5:40:00 PM

Love this personification Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM

Thank you, Carol ~*

Chris Green

Date: 5/23/2017 4:52:00 PM

I thought I commented on this earlier but I guess the soup gremlin got me. I really enjoyed this Eve. I can relate to this so much. Very nicely done.

Eve Roper
Date: 5/23/2017 6:04:00 PM

Well i'm glad you came back. Thank you Chris..