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The town folk were in shock Page 5 As they saw blood run like water As the mob set out to kill All their sons, wife's and daughters The men of the town Drew their guns and started shooting All the murderess men And the others that were looting Like shooting fish in a barrel The mob became depleted But there were so many They could not be defeated By the end of the day Not one soul was left standing As the buzzard circled round And the Sun remained demanding As their blood ran like a river Down the streets onto the plains Then, and only then Did the sky, begin to rain The End almost !

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Date: 8/7/2014 5:21:00 PM
WOW! I missed this the other day, oh man, I want more! :)
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:49:00 AM
Wow, Jerry. Great story and storyteller! You like these gory stories, don't you? lol I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 11:14:00 PM
I like how you did that last verse, "only then did the sky begin to rain" Great final line in this part.
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:02:00 PM
almost?.....very well done my friend... cheers
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