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PADDY GOT IN A PADDY ON ST PATRICK'S DAY

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Paddy’s drinking with his buddy Shaun In fancy dress as a leprechaun To be part of the scene They wear emerald green and get bladdered before break of dawn! Old Paddy supped ten pints of brown ale And then drunk as a skunk, he turns pale He stumbles to the right And gets into a fight Now Paddy’s languishing in the jail! When sober he rings his wife Innis Says ‘Darling, I drank too much Guinness’ And I cannot dispute I got pissed as a newt I’m begging you for your forgiveness! (* the Gaelic name Innis means Island) 2/16/19

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Date: 3/8/2019 7:49:00 PM
Great limerick. Very creative and imaginative. Enjoyed immensely.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2019 4:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Frank:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/21/2019 11:36:00 AM
LOL, love your limericks, my friend
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/9/2019 4:12:00 AM
Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2019 3:49:00 PM
Your title is a winner in any limerick contest all by itself!! Wonderful! Happy St. Pat's day to you and yours! (--if you can hold out that long).. :) gw
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2019 4:22:00 PM
thanks Gershon I withdrew it from the contest as I wrote another more serious poem (for a change lol) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2019 7:54:00 PM
Jan, love your St. Patty limerick, I wrote one too, called- Luck of the Clover !
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2019 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Constance I'll drop by:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2019 2:56:00 PM
A talented write which sure definitely deserves a win! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:18:00 PM
thanks Jennifer I've withdrawn this one and written a serious poem for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2019 9:04:00 AM
Niceone , Jan,,
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:18:00 PM
thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2019 8:30:00 PM
so cute, I especially loved the rhyme in the last verse. GREAT entry!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I appreciate your comment about that final rhyme its my fave of the three:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2019 8:04:00 PM
G'day Jan … I've known a few 'Paddys' Jan. You've described some of them well here. I did avoid them on St Pats though. They needed someone for bail - Lindsay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:14:00 PM
lol Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2019 7:50:00 PM
Jan, this limerick poem is darling! I had no idea that Innis means Island. Thank you for that also!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2019 12:14:00 PM
thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx