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For the The Earth's Oceans Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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Pacific Ocean

"How beautiful you are, so vast and deep; how vital to us all: Magellan’s Mar Pacífico, the 'Peaceful Sea,' so magical to me."  by poet 

         I was named for my peacefulness
though at times I batter shores with angry typhoons.
So large am I that I cover a third of the globe!
            No other ocean compares to me in
     volume or in number of islands and atolls
          whose various beaches I touch upon.
Thirty-thousand islands claim me as their waters,
    and my barrier reefs shield people from storms.

Encompassing vast regions north, south, east and west -
              such as my basin's volcanic “Ring of Fire”
and the Challenge Deep of my Mariana Trench,
        I am home to most of the world’s sea creatures,
             but please keep me clean. Protect me!
Your plastics accumulate in the “Garbage Patch”
   off San Francisco’s coast, extending to Japan.
Precious fish are dying from the mess humans make.

       Generally warm, I welcome you to my shores.
 Surf my waves, ride my currents, and explore my depths. 
      Just remember; without me and my sister seas,
           your vital ecosystems cannot be sustained.
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Kerr Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 12:34 AM
Hi Sara, A deep philosophical cry for help. A profound message suffused with potent imagery and descriptions. Happy writing and a happy new year, Howard
Guptar Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations, dear poetess, on your top win in this contest with a lovely personification poem chanting the gloies of the Pacific Ocean. So true all the oceans together make up the ecosystem, each one vital in its own way to make up the equilibrium together with solid earth. May peace rest with you,
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/quote. Lovely Picture. Wish I was that beach. Have a blessed day with your win...........
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 9:09 AM
Awesome winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Alex Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 12:45 AM
"Just remember; without me and my sister seas, your vital ecosystems cannot be sustained." - Indeed, beautifully written. Congratulations!
George Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 12:27 AM
Hi Andrea, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your first place win. Happy l could be with you and both of us have written on the Pacific ocean.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 9:31 PM
An ocean beautifully personified. Congratulations, Andrea.
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Another great poem win congrats!
Poet Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 11:58 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this great poem.
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Wonderful entry for the contest, Andrea! I feel so distressed when I see the way some people use the Pacific as a garbage dump! Your poem brings our responsibility to be stewards of God's creation to a deeper awareness! Best wishes for the contest. Oceans of blessings to you!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:33 PM
Can’t tell if it’s the front yard or the back yard, cannot use the BBQ pit, because it’s used in both yards. Aloha~dinner’s ready at 7:30 p.m.
Narain Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Great poem with depth and imagery.
May Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Very nicely penned Andrea, I enjoyed the read..
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:17 AM
Andrea, I must say, I am in awe of your poetry. Great insight and expression, with lovely flow and rhyme.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 1:25 AM
Hi Andrea, this is a magnificent poem. I have lost my muse for these contests.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:10 AM
Thanks. Hope your muse returns
George Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 8:26 PM
Beautifully written, dear Andrea. You have encompassed all the details one has to know about this great ocean. All the Best.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 2:10 AM
Thanks, Valsa
Hind Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:28 PM
Lovely- I learned some facts by reading this <3
Bayles Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:54 PM
I like it. We ought to listen to the Pacific.
Crandall Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:01 PM
Great encapsulation of the treasure of the Pacific, which how important it is to all of us ecologically.
Rolland Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 4:00 PM
beautiful and deep poetry, i "put a foot" a few times while in China or California , San Francisco or L.A, i love that ocean too, even living in Brittany close to Atlantic, great too, thanks poet Andrea
Alhemaidy Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful poem about huge sea!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:09 PM
captivating words, Andrea. You've truly captured the beauty of the beautiful, deep blue Pacific sea. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 12:41 PM
The oceans are beautiful. We should keep them so :)
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