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Pachyderm on the Hot Sand

There once was a light-skinned pachyderm Who had a thing for a lowly worm Sun-bathing on the hot sand Elephant got quite a tan Poor worm earned him a wiggly sunburn

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Date: 5/29/2022 8:26:00 PM
lol, now that was a good Limerick
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Date: 5/19/2022 12:33:00 PM
"a wiggly sunburn" - I want to write a song around this idea!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/19/2022 6:50:00 PM
Maybe Buddy Holly will sing it for you... with that hillbilly edge, ya know?
Date: 5/18/2022 1:01:00 PM
Where are their tropical drinks with the little umbrellas? ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/18/2022 6:41:00 PM
With the little umbrellas and their dainty pinkies pointing upward...
Date: 5/18/2022 11:26:00 AM
I do agree, but you do however make the impossible sound possible! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/18/2022 9:03:00 AM
Such a sight to envision GW!! What ever brought that to mind? Good one sir!!
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