Pace The Floor

Slowly sinking to His knees, Sol shoulders the sky; as darkness descends to snuff out the last lingering light. And like Night, I am plunged into darkness, as my candle in the dark flickers out. Last night, she silently slipped away caring naught for the anguish I'd feel, for she bears no love for me: outside of my dreams. She treats me like a ghost, an apparition, she doubts is real: reducing my love to a phantom fantasy. My heart lies broken, fractured by the weight of her absence. Yet the tears I cry are wept in vain for she feels no feelings for me: barely acknowledging my existence. And still, I pace the floor counting the hours, minutes and seconds, since she left. And I pray she will return someday, so that I might be with her again, like before.
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Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 2:58 AM
Such a sad brilliant write Emile. Congratulations on your win :)
Pinet Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Emile. Blessings xxoo
Pinet Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Emile, I hope this is not something you really had to endure. Very sad poem that touched my heart. Congratulations on your place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Pinet Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Carolyn, no it is just a poem my friend, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 2:31 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
Pinet Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 8:21 PM
Well written. I can feel it as I read it. Good luck in the contest :)
Pinet Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:41 AM
This one looks like a winner to me, heartbreak described so well, loved the opening line imagery, few opening lines match that one!
Pinet Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thanks so much John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Staton Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:15 AM
Very nicely written!
Pinet Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Valerie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 9:07 AM
A gut wrenching poem, Emile. Well done.
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