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Pace the Floor

The sun shoulders the sky sinking slowly to its knees as darkness descends to snuff out all traces of light. And like the night, I am plunged into darkness for she has gone to find fortune and fame in the city. Tonight, she'll sleep, knowing naught the anguish I feel, for she bears no love for me outside of my dreams. I've become a ghost, an apparition she's not sure is real. Reduced to a phantom fantasy; My heart is crushed into dust. But the tears I cry are in vain; for she feels nothing for me and barely acknowledges I exist. And yet, I've counted the hours, minutes and seconds since she left; pacing the floor and praying that She'll come back someday soon, so that I might dream once more.

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Date: 6/17/2020 2:58:00 AM
Such a sad brilliant write Emile. Congratulations on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/17/2020 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/16/2020 3:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Emile. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/16/2020 3:47:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/16/2020 1:29:00 PM
Emile, I hope this is not something you really had to endure. Very sad poem that touched my heart. Congratulations on your place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/16/2020 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn, no it is just a poem my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/9/2019 2:31:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/10/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2019 8:21:00 PM
Well written. I can feel it as I read it. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/18/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2019 11:41:00 AM
This one looks like a winner to me, heartbreak described so well, loved the opening line imagery, few opening lines match that one!
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Date: 1/17/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thanks so much John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2019 10:15:00 AM
Very nicely written!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/17/2019 12:15:00 PM
Thanks Valerie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/17/2019 9:07:00 AM
A gut wrenching poem, Emile. Well done.
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