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When I think of famous duos, these two come to mind No, it's not two lovers , nothing of the kind No famous stars strolling down a red carpet walk Reporters following them, hoping for tomorrow's gossip talk But they've been around to feed us a quick meal in a bind Or to eat just for fun and they come in more than one kind First those two fresh pieces of white wonder bread Creamy peanut butter onto each one is carefully spread Next choose the jelly - grape is usually mine But there is also strawberry, apple and many others are fine Put it all together with jelly dripping down your chin A big glass of cold milk, let the feast begin! Yes, I think this duo is one worth the mention Although, it might not get all that very much attention ©Donna Jones

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Date: 8/30/2017 4:41:00 PM
This is lovely..... An awesome piece!
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Date: 8/30/2017 10:48:00 AM
Nice penning Donna, enjoyed this read very much though being a Brit not really into PB & J a it isn't the same popularity as you guys across the pond. But a very good read!
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Date: 4/27/2013 2:17:00 AM
Ha! What a clever take on the contest! I myself love this combo (but I've never cared much for Wonder bread... it's perhaps the health nut in me that goes for the seedy, grainier type bread). An underrated sandwhich, for sure... but I like to amp it up sometimes... every tried almond butter? It's really good on it!
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Date: 4/27/2013 9:47:00 PM
Hi Timothy...no I haven't, tried the almond...don't know if it is available around here but shall check that out...thanks for the visit friend....
Date: 4/15/2013 8:57:00 PM
very fun and clever Donna, i like different. Congratulations with your winning poem in Heather's "Famous Couples/Duos" contest. ~Always* Linda
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Date: 4/16/2013 6:39:00 AM
Thanks Linda.....different? That'd be me.....hahaha
Date: 4/13/2013 11:18:00 AM
Oh, it'll get a lot of attention from ME! Super rhyming couplets and tasty subject matter, and how did you know that was my choice for lunch??? Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/13/2013 7:29:00 PM
Could be because it's mine!!!! Thanks Keith
Date: 4/12/2013 12:50:00 PM
Congrats, Donna. Excellent. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/12/2013 8:43:00 PM
Thank you..:-)
Date: 4/12/2013 11:47:00 AM
Yeah! yeah!... funny write marsh funny win.. Congrats my dear Jones~ A.O
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Date: 4/12/2013 9:10:00 PM
:-) thanks
Date: 4/11/2013 6:08:00 AM
lol Donna, really enjoyed reading this, especially the messy eater part lol. Congratulations in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:18:00 AM
Yeah that's the fun of these..all our life...it never changes...thanks...Donna
Date: 4/11/2013 4:37:00 AM
well, a very original take on this contest! congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Charlotte....:-)
Date: 4/10/2013 10:57:00 PM
Dear Donna, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations for YOUR Well Deserved Win in Heather Ober's Contest "Famous Couples/Duos" YOU have written about one of the most Famous Duo in my History (excuse me I have Strawberry Jelly dripping down my chin) where was I O Yeah- in the history of my Life. Superb Quill.I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:22:00 AM
Mine too Harry...while making one...inspired me to enter them into this duo contest.....thanks....Donna
Date: 4/10/2013 9:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this fun one again. So happy to see it on the winners list so others will get to enjoy it.
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thanks:-) you are kind Richard......Donna
Date: 4/10/2013 7:02:00 PM
Really cute and deserves the praise. A real confectionary pair. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Joyce.....Donna
Date: 4/10/2013 6:43:00 PM
congrats on a great win Donna
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:27:00 AM
:-) thanks!!!!
Date: 4/10/2013 2:32:00 PM
I thought your choice of couples was delicious!!! Mmmm ....think it's time for lunch!!! Congratulations to you, Donna, and this cute entry!!
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:28:00 AM
Thanks Carrie hope you enjoyed your lunch....:-)
Date: 4/10/2013 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Donna xx
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:29:00 AM
:-) thanks Mandy
Date: 4/10/2013 9:40:00 AM
Donna, this poem is adorable :) I am a HUGE fan of PB & J! An extremely creative entry for my contest. Big congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:30:00 AM
Heather it was very fun...thanks for having us and for honoring my silly poem...Donna
Date: 4/10/2013 8:22:00 AM
Great take on this contest!...love it
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Caleb....appreciate it..Donna
Date: 4/9/2013 9:00:00 PM
LOL, Donna, i only thought of one thing when I read your poem... a wonder sandwich sounds good...thank you for teasing my sweet tooth. always~ Linda
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Date: 4/9/2013 9:51:00 PM
Well enjoy a sweet treat! Thanks for stopping...donna
Date: 4/9/2013 4:37:00 PM
Oh this is so clever donna, what a brilliant idea, the subject matter is,,got my attention..
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Date: 4/9/2013 6:13:00 PM
Thanks Harry....do you indulge in the creamy and sticky...pleasure of this subject matter?....appreciate you always stopping..Donna
Date: 4/8/2013 8:09:00 PM
Oh yes........wish I had thought of this.....perfect duo.....made to be together! What a great idea!
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:18:00 PM
Thanks Carrie....always does my heart good to see your..smile...Donna
Date: 4/8/2013 6:25:00 PM
what a unique entry to the contest. I sure hope to see THIS one in the winners list!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/8/2013 9:19:00 PM
Very sweet Andrea...thanks..you are so supportive...
Date: 4/8/2013 6:09:00 PM
Now this is what I call fun. I like how you think. Thanks for your visits and encouraging comments.
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Date: 4/8/2013 9:20:00 PM
I appreciate you stopping to read my silly poem Richard...thanks....donna
Date: 4/8/2013 8:18:00 AM
I'LL BE BACK IN A MINUTE... Okay I'm back. Had to go make a peanut butter and strawberry jam sandwich! Yummy in the tummy! LOL Hugs and kisses, Jack xox
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:50:00 AM
Hey you got a little jam there on your beard Jack...saving it for later??? Thanks for stopping....Donna
Date: 4/8/2013 4:14:00 AM
OOo!!! Got my attention sweet MD! :) I prefer peanut butter with bananas, but jelly is great too! Yummy write! Love ya!
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:52:00 AM
What beautiful happy smiles this morning for me to see...glad you stopped sweet Eileen...and hug that hubby again....MD
Date: 4/8/2013 12:53:00 AM
Donna ha a very original take on the theme...David
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:54:00 AM
Hey David glad to see you this morning....yeah I couldn't help myself...growing up on these....I reworked it a bit since you read it, I hope for the better..thanks for stopping...it always means so much...Donna
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