P & M

******************************P************************


Paranormal peasants of a pathetic and patient percentile
                 perpetrate peace from perjury..
    A patriarch, parallel to a peaceful partisan passage..




******************************M************************


Meditation maliciously masks my mighty monogamous minx.
Modestly managing my machismo, mastering my maturity.


Jared Pickett
4/06/2010
Asavvy1

imaginationalliteration

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Robert A. Dufresne

May 2, 2010 at 6:27 PM

Nice ones Jared!...he said.. as he unraveled his tongue. Love alliteration alot!-Robert -trying to work up subject for your Sestina.. brain appears to be fried temporarily ''at least I hope temporarily... ;)

Charmaine Chircop

April 10, 2010 at 10:18 PM

Marvellous Masterpieces...you made me smile Jared:)..Lovely..Charma.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 8, 2010 at 12:33 PM

Thankxxx Lone Wolf ... where have ye been? and why so quiet? ... going to enter my second contest? .. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Sara Kendrick

April 8, 2010 at 10:55 AM

The humor is overpowering I might have to run..LOL>.Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

April 8, 2010 at 6:47 AM

That first line of the "m" words is brilliant. Great alliteration in both verses, Jared! Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 6, 2010 at 10:42 PM

I enjoyed the poem with impressive alliteration

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 6, 2010 at 3:54 PM

Wonderful words with wisdom wandering within wondrous works ... especially enjoyed ending everso emphatic ...emotional elegance... nice alliteration too .. where u been? luv.. "Sweetheart"