Owls

Not  a sound. Now hush . 
Its the flap of a wing against a faded autumn leaf
the shaking of a tree branch as the snowy owl leaps .
And now a russell of fallen leaves mixed with a swish of dew covered grass
A mouse nervously looks for food knowing death is just a wings flap away.
 
The snowy Owls owlets wait eager for  food and natures  lifes cycle must be rode
The owl see's just the dropping of dew .
Swoops with talons bared and glint in its eye then disappeared into the night sky
and one single red droplet lands during the flight to indicate the mouses last fight.

The barn roof is broken the nest lays within 
the noise level rises as the hooting begins 
The owlets now feed and can go back to sleep 
and the owl fly's away  to do it again, 


for a comp owls 11/02/16

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Date: 2/16/2016 12:39:00 PM
Hi Stephen, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/16/2016 12:43:00 PM
thank you
Date: 2/16/2016 1:10:00 AM
Wonderful write Stephen n so is the win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/16/2016 2:43:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/16/2016 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/16/2016 2:43:00 AM
cheers
Date: 2/15/2016 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Stephen!
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/16/2016 2:44:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/15/2016 5:56:00 PM
Yep, get up, go to work, night shift, bring home the "bacon", feed the kids, catch a nap, and back to work.....Good job Stephen
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/16/2016 2:46:00 AM
life is tough john it aint a hoot lol
Date: 2/15/2016 10:32:00 AM
Well written owl poem congrats xxxxx
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/15/2016 10:36:00 AM
thank you enjoyed writing it :-)
Date: 2/15/2016 8:36:00 AM
Well done for a placement, Stephen. Congratulations.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/15/2016 10:41:00 AM
thank all good fun trying to write a poem this one grown wings :-)
Date: 2/15/2016 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations, Stephen on your prize winning write. Great write.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/15/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thank you just seen these comments chuffed stephen :-)
Date: 2/15/2016 3:44:00 AM
I really like your very descriptive personification, Stephen. Many congrats. Elaine
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/15/2016 7:15:00 AM
thank you for taking time to comment and cheers :-)
Date: 2/14/2016 10:37:00 PM
Stephen, your “Owls ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/15/2016 7:14:00 AM
thank you , pleased as punch you like it Stephen :-)
Date: 2/11/2016 5:04:00 PM
Love the write, don't forget to submit it in the contest. I'm not suppose to do this, but I would hate to see it go by. Hugs Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
cheers thought i had done it lol
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 2/12/2016 8:49:00 AM
cheers thought i had done it lol
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