Owls

Not  a sound. Now hush . 
Its the flap of a wing against a faded autumn leaf
the shaking of a tree branch as the snowy owl leaps .
And now a russell of fallen leaves mixed with a swish of dew covered grass
A mouse nervously looks for food knowing death is just a wings flap away.
 
The snowy Owls owlets wait eager for  food and natures  lifes cycle must be rode
The owl see's just the dropping of dew .
Swoops with talons bared and glint in its eye then disappeared into the night sky
and one single red droplet lands during the flight to indicate the mouses last fight.

The barn roof is broken the nest lays within 
the noise level rises as the hooting begins 
The owlets now feed and can go back to sleep 
and the owl fly's away  to do it again, 


for a comp owls 11/02/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Hi Stephen, Congratulations on your "Owls Personification form WIN." Always ~LINDA~
Pennell  Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 12:43 PM
thank you
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Wonderful write Stephen n so is the win.. big congrats!
Pennell  Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:43 AM
thank you
Gentry Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 1:07 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Pennell  Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:43 AM
cheers
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Stephen!
Pennell  Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:44 AM
thank you
Lawless Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Yep, get up, go to work, night shift, bring home the "bacon", feed the kids, catch a nap, and back to work.....Good job Stephen
Pennell  Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:46 AM
life is tough john it aint a hoot lol
Rycroft Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Well written owl poem congrats xxxxx
Pennell  Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:36 AM
thank you enjoyed writing it :-)
Lane Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Well done for a placement, Stephen. Congratulations.
Pennell  Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 10:41 AM
thank all good fun trying to write a poem this one grown wings :-)
Turner Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations, Stephen on your prize winning write. Great write.
Pennell  Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Thank you just seen these comments chuffed stephen :-)
George   Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:44 AM
I really like your very descriptive personification, Stephen. Many congrats. Elaine
Pennell  Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:15 AM
thank you for taking time to comment and cheers :-)
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Stephen, your “Owls ” was wonderful! Thank you so much for writing a very special poem for my contest I was honored. Happy Valentine’s Day Hugs Eve
Pennell  Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:14 AM
thank you , pleased as punch you like it Stephen :-)
Roper Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Love the write, don't forget to submit it in the contest. I'm not suppose to do this, but I would hate to see it go by. Hugs Eve
Pennell  Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:50 AM
cheers thought i had done it lol
Pennell  Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:49 AM
cheers thought i had done it lol
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