Overwhelmingly Vast( Mirrored Refrain)

Love takes time to grow ever eternal
They say love is blind, though I do not think so.
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,
Building of new friendships and more to know,

Friends may stay friends or become lovers.
Lovers may forever bond or drift back to past
Building of new friendships and more to know,
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,

Two may depart but stay so close at hand.
Both, either or, may decide to let it go
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,
Building of new friendships and more to know,

Future endeavors make it hard, not to concede.
That will always be memories that last.
Building of new friendships and more to know,
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,

When children are formed by the bond between two,
A link formed forever in their beautiful glow.
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,
Building of new friendships and more to know,

Whether successful or not, a true mystery is love,
Each of us continues to fall as love spells are cast.
Building of new friendships and more to know,
The bond is breathless and overwhelmingly vast,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/31/2010 8:01:00 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:05:00 AM
A lovely win, congratulations, Cecil. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 3/30/2010 7:51:00 PM
A well deserved place among the winners. all full of breathless expectation. great job Cecil, well done....Margaret
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:58:00 PM
Awww man, The night I read this poem for the first time I knew this would place among the elite... You brought tears to my eyes my friend... Congratulations, you definitely deserve it.....:JP]
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Date: 3/30/2010 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem and third place win in Jared's contest with this magnificent write and well deserved trip to the winners circle... enjoy your special victory..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/30/2010 2:33:00 PM
Lovely mirrored refrain. congratulations onyour win. Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:52:00 PM
A wonderful poem, and a well deserved win in the contest, Cecil!! 3rd place...Good for you!!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Cecil. I wish you the best in the contest Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 9:31:00 PM
A wonderful contest entry Cecil and a great job on the mirrored refrain form.. good luck.. this is certainly a winning poem.. I also entered Flamboyant tonight.. I have never written this before and took it from Jared's example...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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