Overwhelming

Overwhelming joy when  she replied, " I love you too" 
Very beautiful woman seen and memorized in  
Early 2001, when I was qualified to be an Electrician 
Really , She was so sociable, godfearing and  
Wise woman who answered all my criteria but 
Heaven called her , she  was   filling  my  heart,  
Elected by my heart gone, I was down in the dumps for 
Long period to decide to go on with my life  and 
Meet other woman who could comfort me 
In that forlorn period , oh! yes , I was over the moon as 
New adorable face was captured to erase the old one 
Glory was of God who gives and takes when He wants. 

March 24 /2023
Written for poetry contest sponsored by Constance la France
 Theme chosen : OVERWHELMING

....Third place winning in
 This poetry contest .....
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Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 10:52 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... a lovely poem, Alfonso :) -
Thank you so much for your compliments You are welcome...Sunshine.
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Romantic write Alfonso. I'm glad you found truly wonderful woman! Congratulations on your win! :)
Thank you so much for your compliments. Life is so nice when there is no much noise into your ears. Thanks for visiting my blog. You are welcome
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March 26, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Alfonso, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words, a very good poem, blessings, Constance
When the bottled truth shared , Good people always feel happy. Thank you so much for your compliments and wishes. You are welcome
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