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Overture

the music serenades the midnight hour
opening the door to let you waltz into my dreams

you're suave you're smooth
how i wish i could feel the touch i crave

but it's this loop of an ethereal overture
that plays and plays inside my heart

as each night i rock myself to sleep
in the arms of an elusive lover



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on September 22, 2021 for 'O' CONTEST sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 1ST
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La France Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this splendid poem, I am speechless at the beauty of your voice, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:13 PM
O my goodness, Constance. Thank you so much for my win and your lovely compliment. I'm honored.
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 11:09 AM
So lovely. So mystical! So romantic Line. Congratulations for your win. Sending you many blessings to serenade you to sleep!
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thank you so much, Sam ~ most appreciated
Skelly Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 8:06 AM
You have created a haunting atmosphere with this free verse. Loved it...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thanks, Delice ~ much appreciated
Mcintosh Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:15 AM
Lovely write. Best wishes in the contest. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Gauthier Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Thank you, Gina ~
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