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Overthoughts

How do you put into words feelings you'd rather not have? This isn't how it started And this isn't how it'll end. But sometimes I wonder if I shared what's really on my mind, would you smile and agree with me or turn away for good? Deep down I know something more would not work. But the crazy idea of it frequently crosses my mind. Can you see it in my eyes when we're doing what we do? Or are you truly only here for that hour or two?

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Date: 2/17/2011 11:34:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Gabriela. I know this is a late welcome but, I have had some very pressing matters going on. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next week or so. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:43:00 AM
I love your line. thoughtful and insightful piece you have here dear, I hope you are good. Welcome to the loveliest poetry site on earth! You will enjoy, the poets, poems & pages here! Learn & live Pearl! Have a great time. love, always... Adeleke
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Date: 2/9/2011 10:16:00 AM
Nice thoughts you have penned here.Beautiful poem!
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Date: 2/9/2011 5:36:00 AM
good poem! Welcome to poetry soup hope to read more of you!!!
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