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Oversized Bugs

The theme of this masterpiece is love, sweet love The stirring in my loins has caused quite a buzz The neighbours do wonder Says it sounds like thunder Told them not to worry, it's just some oversized bugs

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/21/2017 1:51:00 PM

Big bugs eh? Must have been in Florida.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/21/2017 2:05:00 PM

Long time since I visited Florida... bugs are still big I'm sure! You seem more reserved today! Love, Jack xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/21/2017 8:20:00 AM

Is that a Cicada in your pocket or are ya happy to see me? I love bugs. Well not all bugs. I certainly marvel all bugs. Dreamed about dragonflies last night :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/21/2017 8:27:00 AM

No! I'm just happy to see you!!! lol You dreamt of dragonflies last night??? Hmm! Lovesies my dear Mo! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/21/2017 8:03:00 AM

You've got ants in your pants?//Causing a vociferous dance?//Cutting a rug//while the neighbors you bug//The reason they're moving perchance? BUG ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/21/2017 8:11:00 AM

"a vociferous dance" whoooaaaa! Swallowed a dictionary did you? $10 dollar word! Haven't missed a beat!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/21/2017 6:32:00 AM

Oh I would hate to hear those bugs! I hate bugs period, I don't want to know anything about bugs unless its buggs bunny, then you can tell me abut him!! Your write is tremendous my friend! I surely enjoyed reading this delightful ditty poem this morning! You have enthralled by your comical theme today! Great work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/21/2017 6:38:00 AM

You grew up on a farm and you hate bugs... how did you manage that??? lol