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They say I’m sensitive Negative connotation A shroud they want to wrap me in And put the blame on me It’s only a joke, you see Overly sensitive That’s me I smile Positive connotations, my wile Oh…I’m OVERLY sensitive It’s true The throbbing and pulsing That makes other women sigh Takes me to the stratosphere high Senstations multiplied I sigh I cry I die And lie Open Sensitive to every touch To every nuance To every breath Body quivering Mind in overdrive I thrive On pleasure Every cell Sensitive To touch To tongue To lips To fingers To thoughts…. To…..W~O~R~D~S Dipped in sensitivity Meant to awaken The sultry sensual me Oh...I'm OVERLY sensitive To my lover’s needs Wanting to please Tease Make him weak… Unable to speak Waiting for that butterfly caress That unbuttoning of the dress That peek a boo see through lace That wanton hungry…”feed me” face I trace every place sensitive to the signs that make him come alive To satiate, my pride I rule and provide His momentum...I guide OVERLY sensitive till want and need are released...freed! OH….I’m OVERLY sensitive Yes, It's true and here's a warning a warning to you!!! Don’t mess with me Unless you want to see Anarchy!!! I’ll draw blood In your "knock her down" revelry I'll win I'll fly and be free!! I’m OVERLY sensitive That’s me But I’d rather be this way Desire delirious Mayhem mad Passion proned Happy honed OVERLY sensitive people Like ME We.... LIVE life Moment by moment Second by sensual second sensitive and alive we thrive we survive Overly sensitive ALIVE! Eileen Manassian

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Date: 6/29/2015 3:44:00 PM
Some great comments Eileen. I'm glad I came back for another look.
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Date: 6/18/2015 10:35:00 AM
What a lovely and emotive poem, Eileen! You show things as they are, no beating around the bush, no hiding behind excuses. Those who read your poetry know by now exactly what you mean by overly sensitive. I can be sensitive, emotional, although like Peter said, I don't always show it. Full marks to you:) Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/15/2015 1:45:00 AM
Wow!! What a wonderful write Eileen full of emotion 7! Excellent...........A.M.
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:37:00 PM
One word -- Perfection!! LO is perfect in everyway! Love it. 7
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Date: 6/14/2015 3:35:00 PM
Eileen, this is so awesome and amazing, full of emotions and strength, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dreams of writing
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:20:00 PM
Who would not want to experience this level of sensitivity?! This is Hot! Ooh la la hot! Check out my group poem, there is a surprise for you.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 12:53:00 PM
Hi, Richard! :) Can't wait to see what you have for me....BTW...made a few changes in the stanza about my lover. Hope you give it a second read. Hugs
Date: 6/14/2015 10:57:00 AM
Powerful, Eileen! You know who you are and refuse to be anyone else! You are a masterpiece created by God to be the person He created you to be! Your sensitivity allows you creative expression that shines forth in your poetry. An excellent write! Love, Kim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 12:56:00 PM
You are very kind, Kim. I know. I sometimes question God about it. I seem to be a bundle of sensitivities...and that a rather large bundle! ;) He knows what he's doing. I just need to get my act together. Thanks for looking favorably on this though it has a streak of rebellion in there. He knows....Thanks, dear. Hugs
Date: 6/14/2015 7:25:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments on my poem/song. Your for me I have put it on you tube, no music just me singing as I felt the tune sounded in my heart, Got 4videos on there now, brave like with out instruments,
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/14/2015 12:57:00 PM
WOW! That's an accomplishment, Diane. I'm glad you are using the gifts He has given you to His glory. I used to do that....I encourage you to keep on keeping on. Hugs
Date: 6/14/2015 6:57:00 AM
Bless you I am a sensitive soul emotionally So I get you, life brought so much heartache to my door, and some words just cut deeper than a knife, but God is working on it, he needs me sensitive to others needs to help them spiritually but some of the simplest words make me cry, Sounds dart, but some wounds are deep and need more time, a good write, I'm glad I'm not the only one in the world sensitive
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Date: 6/14/2015 7:04:00 AM
Diane....So sweet of you to visit. I know I went a little overboard here, but I'm so tired of hearing that word..."oversensitive". There definitely are advantages to being overly sensitive. "Sensitive people suffer more, but they love more and dream more." This is a lovely quotation. Yes, it's called empathy and compassion. I'm glad you are open to God's voice....Thanks so much for visiting me again. I'll be right over. Hugs

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