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OVERHEARD

Candid conversation Overheard A glimpse Into delirium Tangled Winding Unwinding In tandem To candied slices of reality A tangent set off course In a realm of free radicals Exponentially complex In a most quirky bizarre Parallel universe posted on October 3, 2019

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Date: 10/3/2019 10:49:00 PM
Well, you've r e a l l y got me wondering on this one ~ pretty darn cool!
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Date: 10/3/2019 8:19:00 PM
The last several lines summoned up images of some of the Earthling-Martian attempts at conversation in Ray Bradbury's "Martian Chronicles." Great! :) gw
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Date: 10/3/2019 9:57:00 PM
Wow - ok! LOL
Date: 10/3/2019 4:52:00 PM
This has exactly the right amount of quirky.
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Date: 10/3/2019 4:54:00 PM
Thanks, Caren.