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Kick the leaves, let bodies grow Framed in Autumn showers glow Rake the peak of ‘tober’s show Pumpkin hues a zephyr throw Saffron shake of candy snow And brittle brown tornado Child’s reaction blow by blow Swirling, twirling, vertigo Rosy leapers letting go Roars Calypso overflow
10/15/2020

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Date: 10/18/2020 1:22:00 PM
awesome autumnal monorhyming!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Always means a lot coming from you! xx
Date: 10/18/2020 7:18:00 AM
I really like the flow, rhythm, and rhyme in this one. Way to go. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 10/18/2020 6:58:00 AM
Such a great musical piece, Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 5:49:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 10/15/2020 8:58:00 AM
Wow, excellent poem Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 10/15/2020 7:40:00 AM
Exuberance of hues in autumn's show--painted in brilliant colors. A lovely write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2020 12:01:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!

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