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Overcoming Frustration Woes

“In my distress I called upon the LORD, and cried unto my God: he heard my voice out of his temple, and my cry came before him, even into his ears.” Psalm 18:6 of the King James Bible

                        Frustration obscures hope, dimming victory glow
            gripping heart with failure angst toward worthlessness’ plunge
tortured by self-pity while wallowing in agonizing oppressive dilemma…
My soul loathes this miserable condition I resolve to overcome.
 
                        When unfinished goals bring distress gloom
my time management skill is challenged along multi-tasking expertise   
locking me inside frustration-cell where guilt feasting mockingly welcomes.  

      With feeling of futility incessantly engulfing my achievement-oriented mind 
            the urge to accomplish compels me more rigorously
                        suffocating me midst anticipated frustration-anxiety.

Now, I surrender my own frustration pangs of afflicting debility
            to God, my loving Saviour Who grants triumph, assuring bliss
      enabling me to conquer by faith
                        personal infirmities to serve jubilantly for His honour.

July 22, 2021
4th place, "Writing Prompt - Fragmented Spaces" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 8/13/2021.
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La France Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt, Fragmented Spaces, using my created form. You made my form look wonderful, well done ~Constance
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August 14, 2021 at 12:28 AM
Congrats on your win, Beata.
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win Beata. You deserve it with this great poem. The imagery, metaphors, and exquisite poetic lines were beautiful. Blessings
Michael Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 4:55 AM
Give it all to him the good and the bad...and just love him. Well done
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