Overclocked

What must it be like to be male? To live with an overclocked metabolic system that’s always on the lookout for brazen and unmistakable propositions - like a smile or a "please pass the salt."

I mean at times we all have those feelings - primitive as oil -  but not the constant, fast forward, high density need that males seem to live with.

It must be like wrestling a trapped demon..
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*this piece is supposed to be a slight exaggeration for comic effect - a satire*

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Date: 8/13/2021 9:46:00 PM
I get it Anais. Tongue in cheek. Some guys are, indeed, on a testosterone tightrope. Wait till they age. Keep the verses coming. Your postings are a cooling breeze for an over heated summer. Take care, Brian
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Anais Vionet
Date: 8/14/2021 8:45:00 AM
Thanks - you comments are poems!
Date: 7/5/2021 7:06:00 AM
Sometimes it is a blessing and sometimes it is a curse; sometimes you win and sometimes you get shot down, but it is always better than just sitting around waiting for something to happen...this being from a male's point of view. :) John
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Date: 7/5/2021 9:09:00 AM
ahhh.. take charge - the number of "at bats" and all =]
Date: 7/4/2021 7:26:00 PM
Thank you, Anais, but I am male, and you are not describing me. I'm sorry you have this general impression of the male gender.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 7/5/2021 2:09:00 AM
Oh - NO! I like guys - this piece is supposed to be a slight exaggeration for comic effect - a satire.
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