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Overambitious

falling from their nests chicks lose spatial awareness ~ fox below finds it By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/20/2021 5:19:00 AM
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OOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you didn't! Yes, you did. My imagination provided me a pretty grim graphic, so thanks for this one before I have my breakfast!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 8:37:00 AM
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Nooooooooo honestly I didn’t touch them, the chicks jumped without my hand, fledged too early, how could you even think that about me, ha.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 5:54:00 AM
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Your on breakfast I’m after my dinner, stupid birds jumping before they can fly, and mr fox standing with his mouth open below, isn’t nature mad, cheers David

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