Over The Waters Blue

"over the waters blue the night winds sigh, the breakers roar" ... Samual Taylor Coleridge
Over the waters blue I love to sail, many times I get to see a big whale. Some nights the wind will sigh, like saying oh my. Some nights the wind seems to sing, I can hear our ship's bell ring. Today the sky is gray, look we are coming into the bay. Not much time to be free, then back out to the blue sea. The breakers roar, sounding like a huge old boar. The sea life is for me, needing to fly like a big yellow bee. I love being a sailor, living in a cabin and not a trailer.
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Romios Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Whoopie, Paula…This is fantastic. Pangie. Well deserved win! Sorry that I spelled your name in error! Came back to correct))) Pangie xx
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July 21, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this one. Always great to see you. Hope you are OK... Have a fun/great day...............
Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 10:06 PM
Belated congrats here, dear
Goldsmith Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 8:55 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Always great to see you. Have a fun/great day...............
La France Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, like your poem, and the chosen quote, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write/quote. I always enjoy writing in your wonderful contest. You make me think. Thanks for having the contest/for my placement. I would love to live by the pretty blue sea. Have a fun/great day...............
Edmonds  Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Back with congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest Paula, well done… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write again. It is always great to see you here. I wish I could live by the pretty blue sea. Have a fun/great day...............
Poet Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Lovely poem, Paula. My heartfelt congratulations on your win
Goldsmith Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 1:05 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your heartfelt congratulations. Glad you found this to be a Lovely poem. I enjoyed writing this one... Have a fun/great day out on the water...............
Gasun Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 9:17 AM
Such a fantastic write my dear poet friend. I love and enjoyed this a lot. Great rhyme too. Thank you so much for sharing dear poet friend. CONGRATULATIONS on your win! Hugs. Blessings to you always and your writings. Have a wonderful day!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 12:59 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your CONGRATULATIONS. Glad you found this to be Such a fantastic write. I enjoyed reading your kind words. Thanks.... Hugs... Have a fun/great day...............
Goldsmith Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:43 AM
"5 Place"  Over The Waters Blue ~ BIO Rhyme ~ Not a true story. Just a write. Date Written: 5/28/2024
Buehler Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Lovely thoughts on the wild, blue sea, Paula. I can practically feel the wind in my hair! Best of wishes.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for your Best of wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write. Yes, I could feel the wind in my hair as I wrote this one. I wish I could live by the pretty blue sea. Have a fun/great day...............
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Interesting form to choose, Paula. Fun idea to put yourself in another person's shoes!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 11:40 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write. Yes, I am in the sailor's shoes/life. Have a fun/great day...............
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:20 AM
- A wonderful life to live ... I enjoy "sailing" on the blue water ... (is out with our boat as often as we can :) - A lovely poem, Paula :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found this to be a lovely poem. If I had a boat, I would also be out on it as often as I could. Hugs... Have a fun/great day out on the water...............
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Creative work. I am wondering if it is for a contest. Thanks for sharing. Your visits to my page added a special touch. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found this to be Creative work. Yes, for a contest. I really enjoyed writing this one... Have a fun/great day...............
Greenhough Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:54 AM
The sea and the wind bring this poem to life. Adventure is fun but a sailor's life is harsh. I like your poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write. Yes, a sailor's life is harsh. Maybe the love of the sea makes it better. I wish I could live by sea. To see it/to hear it would be heavenly... Have a fun/great day...............
Rodgers Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 6:01 AM
Dear Paula, I just read your poem and it’s such a delightful and amazing journey! Your love for the sea shines through every line, and I could almost hear the wind sigh and the breakers roar. The imagery is fantastic, and your poem perfectly captures life's freedom and adventure at sea. Your playful and heartfelt words made me smile. Keep sharing your beautiful seafaring spirit! - Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write & found it to be delightful/amazing journey. I love the sea/wish I could live by it. This BIO is being told by a sailor who loves the sea. Not a true story/just a write. Have a fun/great day...............
Proxenos Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 3:59 AM
Hi there Paula, your love for the sea is no secret, it has always been evident in the oh so creative writing you post for our pleasure, bravo my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed my fun sea write. Yes, I really love the sea & wish I could live by it but can't. Hugs... Have a fun/great day...............
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 8:07 PM
A fun write, dear Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:18 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you enjoyed this fun sea write. It was fun to write. Have a fun/great day..............
May Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 4:33 PM
The ocean breeze sings as you sail, Lovely write
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note. Glad you found this to be a Lovely write. It was fun to write. Have a fun/great day...............
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May 28, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Lovely poetry Paula, a very good take on the quote you chose as your theme. Wishing you all the best for the contest… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 9:08 AM
Thanks for your wonderful note and for all the best. Glad you enjoyed this fun sea write. I really enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun/great day...............
Goldsmith Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Over The Waters Blue ~ BIO Rhyme ~ Not a true story. Just a write. Date Written: 5/28/2024
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