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OVER THE RAINBOW

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Write 3 beautiful Lines Contest. Sponsored by Constance La France. 03/05/25

The sight of a rainbow is so uplifting - the elusive pot of gold is the sun waiting to peep through the clouds. Quote by Poet. A kaleidoscope of colour arcs the sky Such beauty always makes me cry I must wipe a small tear from my eye

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John Loving Iii

Date: 3/15/2025 3:38:00 PM

A prism has three sides and so does the rainbow.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/12/2025 7:09:00 PM

Jan, it's exciting to see it. All good really. Hopefully, we will see many more so we can shed more tears! Smiles!!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/8/2025 3:51:00 AM

Beautiful tears ...XXX

Terry Miller

Date: 3/8/2025 2:28:00 AM

A beautiful three lines, congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2025 2:09:00 AM

- The rainbow, a symbol of beauty and happiness, Jan ... beautifully written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Michael Tor

Date: 3/7/2025 10:52:00 PM

Lovely imagery Jan and such beauty through your words.

Deb M

Date: 3/7/2025 9:16:00 AM

Awww Jan your poem is so uncomplicatedly beautiful! Love the power of simplicity....Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 3/7/2025 3:23:00 AM

This is so beautiful dear jan, i love the first line the most, and also how you’ve written that such beauty makes you cry. Sometimes when i see beauty of nature i think of all the little reasons why i should appreciate and be grateful in life. I remembered a rainbow that dressed the skyline last year as i read this, the day someone in my family passed away. It was like a sign from above… a very stunning poem. And your quote definitely resonates! Best wishes for the contest. Enjoyed reading this

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/6/2025 3:24:00 PM

Jan, a beautiful poem and quote too. -hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/6/2025 1:54:00 PM

The poem and the picture are beautiful. No color is missed, not even the colors we can't see.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/6/2025 10:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "OVER THE RAINBOW" write. Pretty Picture and Great quote... I am still looking for the pot of gold. Did you find it??? Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away..........

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/6/2025 5:39:00 AM

Beautiful words my friend. Rainbows are one of those things in nature that make me stop and give thanks for His glory.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/6/2025 5:27:00 AM

Dear Jan, Your poem is a breathtaking reflection of the beauty that surrounds us. It's no wonder that such beauty moves you to tears for it's a testament to the profound impact nature can have on our souls. Your beautiful words tell me to pause, appreciate, and let ourselves be moved by the beauty of the world around us. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel