Over the Hill

The hill is not high,
Maybe 200 feet – high enough.
It is a swath of ascending greenery
Just a few small boulders,
some low shrubs.

At the top we are panting;
an old man and his old dog.
Nevertheless I feel great,
I shout in a weak voice,
shout at the sky, glad to be here.

My dog tugs at his leash.
He wants to go down the other side of the hill,
but not I.

We both trot back the way we came up.
I just didn’t want 
to end up further over the hill,
lower 
than where I had started.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 2:07 PM
Hello Eric Ashford, oh that sounds like a lovely walk with your dog. yes it is best to go back the way you came. Be strong, healthy and be well. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 5:49 PM
hello Eric, yes it is a good idea to retrace your steps. Stay safe, be strong, be healthy. enjoy your evening my friend.
Ashford Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Hi Darlene, often retracing steps is a wise move. Have a lovely day and thank you.
Ashford Avatar
March 26, 2020 at 2:19 PM
Hi Darlene, often retracing steps is a wise move. Have a lovely day and thank you.
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