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Over Tea and Coffee

the air

If blue is the right colour
she eyes honestly blonde
in dissection of relation
the alpine purification.


        after

It’s xtc
over a candle
a low table
two cups of coffee


        honestly

Mind: did she add sugar,
wasn’t the milk half sour?
It looked okay we think
two platonic units.


        poetic

Claims so mystically with you
lays a hair tween b&w
the sheath and the blank weapon
as the highest rule is blunt.


        simply

I search the words
and still love my love.
I drink it black
As I like it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fisher Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Wish you more success. Ernilando
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April 12, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jan. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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February 6, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Creative write with great imagery. Liked the style.
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