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For A Magical Journey Poetry Contest  / sponsored by Constance La France

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(Lines 1-3 of the poem are those of the sponsor, Constance La France) "Fantasy is the magical stuff much of my poetry is made of." by author
I hold three magic rocks, in my hand, rolling them over and over and over. Leaving this reality behind, far behind, I close my eyes. . . I’m in a field of clover! I stand there enthralled by its loveliness. I lie down; it’s like being in a verdant sea, and fluffy clouds in an azure sky seem to be swimming lazily above me. Over and over and over again, I roll the three rocks. There’s a change of scene. I’m floating on one of those clouds up above, this time looking down at the clover sea of green. The cloud, in the shape of an elephant, takes me for a ride across the sky. Oh, that cloud is changing its shape now. I’m falling, wondering if I will die! I roll those magic rocks over and over and over again, closing my eyes, for fear I’ll hit the ground. My eyes fly open, and I’m so surprised, for in a dry hot desert I’m now found. Sweltering, I look around. This is not for me. Over and over and over again, I roll those three rocks, and then in a blink - I’m in a woods on the wing of a wren. I’m as small as a fairy on this bird’s wing. She soars to a mountain. I feel myself shiver. Next she flies downward, and absolute blue is beckoning me. We’re following a river. I love all I’m seeing, but tired am I. Still clasping the magic rocks inside my hand, over and over and over again, I roll them. Oh my, I see a winter wonderland. A blanket of snow I have fallen into. It’s glistening with beauty, but it’s so cold. I’m weary and longing just to be home. Can the rocks hear me and do as they’re told? This time I speak out while rolling the three rocks over and over and over again: “Take me home.” I’m in my own bed! Was it all but a dream? The three rocks have vanished. Will I no more magically roam?

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Date: 2/26/2025 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading wonderful write/quote. Fun Picture... Have a great day.............
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Date: 2/26/2025 6:40:00 AM
I really enjoy all the sceneries you've painted, Andrea. Vivid, magical, yet, in a sense, very real. Congrats on the 1st place win!
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Date: 2/26/2025 6:05:00 AM
Very creative and full of dream like imagery, encompassing all the senses. You've taken us on a journey for sure! I love how different all of these poems are and yet they stem from the same first lines. Congratulations on first place! Xo
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Date: 2/25/2025 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations your poem was a magical journey of painted landscapes
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Date: 2/18/2025 9:42:00 PM
Thank you for taking me on such an exciting journey. Your imagery was just so vivid. Well done Andrea good luck.
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Date: 2/18/2025 9:13:00 PM
Magical - just lovely <3
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Date: 2/18/2025 1:49:00 PM
Such an incredibly beautiful poem Andrea...engaging read my friend! Debx
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Date: 2/18/2025 1:33:00 PM
Andrea, apparently you have the ability to roam whenever you wish to. All these places in a short time is pretty remarkable. You're making me smile!
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Date: 2/18/2025 9:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem embarking on dreamy destinations.
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Date: 2/17/2025 11:19:00 PM
A wonderful poem on the subject. Alas I have written nothing for the past days as I have computer problems and will have to buy a new one. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/17/2025 7:46:00 PM
An exciting and captivating dream .Love it
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Date: 2/17/2025 5:07:00 PM
no ups nor downs in fact, home is best no east nor west Inspired by the lovely poetess Andrea Dietrich. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/over_and_over_and_over_again_1707594.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/18/2025 4:04:00 PM
For sure
Date: 2/17/2025 4:37:00 PM
I enjoy the flying imagination in your poem. It sounds like a fairy tale ( which could make you rich if Disney buys it). Just noticed. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/17/2025 3:19:00 PM
Given 3 magical rocks, how hard it would be to put them down, but eventually a poet gets tired! Enjoyed all the fun, dear Andrea!
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Date: 2/17/2025 12:38:00 PM
Ah a vivid description a daydream and it is captivating enough to be able to pull the reader in and imagine herself in those shoes.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/17/2025 3:16:00 PM
thanks, Miranda.

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