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OVER-EXPOSURE

OVER-EXPOSURE
An immodest young fellow called Dan Sunbathed nude for an all-over tan The neighbours complained So he was arraigned And he spent the next year in the can

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 8/22/2024 1:45:00 AM
Great limerick, great meter, congratulations
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Date: 8/19/2024 1:47:00 PM
Perfect meter and humor. Congrats on a well deserved win
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Date: 8/18/2024 6:28:00 AM
Bryn, congratulations on your first place win with your funny limerick.
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Date: 7/26/2024 5:23:00 AM
Poor Dan. By the time he gets out he'll be white as a ghost. Sigh
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/26/2024 2:19:00 PM
Worse
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 7/26/2024 1:12:00 PM
I suppose he could be covered in stripes if the sun shines through the bars

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