Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Outstanding In His Field

Tim said I was outstanding, did he mean out standing in the field
It's bloody cold out there, spring has yet to be revealed
Wearing just jockeys
Sure got some moxy
Since the last operation on my brain it hasn't yet healed

© Jack Ellison 2015

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Leo Larry Amadore March 9, 2015 at 10:37 PM Reminds me somewhat of the old Boudreaux and Thibodeaux joke about the farmer who wanted to win the Nobel Prize, since he could be said to always be out standing in his field......enjoyed reading your poem..... Jack Ellison March 10, 2015 at 6:50 AM That's the one! LOL Thanks my friend... cheers!

Carol Eastman March 9, 2015 at 10:45 AM Come visit down our way... The cold has all gone away... With Limericks in hand... It'll never be bland... And with Dragon you can play! Jack Ellison March 9, 2015 at 10:49 AM Packing my bags as we speak!!! So you write limericks too! YEEHAW... it can be very addicting! Good one dear Carol... xxx

Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 10:31 AM the comments are as funny as the poem Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx Jack Ellison March 9, 2015 at 10:36 AM "a lover or mistress or prostitute"!!! I'll take 'em whatever you call them! Yah right! At my age??? LOL Hugs, brother Jack xxx

Viv Wigley March 9, 2015 at 9:57 AM You deserve a #7 for just using the word 'moxy'. I look forward to reading a future submission involving a Doxy. Not, obviously, on an intimate level. It's just a great word. Nice Limerick, Jack. Jack Ellison March 9, 2015 at 10:21 AM Hmm! Dictionary describes it as a "lover or mistress or a prostitute"!!! LOL We have a restaurant here called Moxie's... wonder if they know! LOL

Tim Smith March 9, 2015 at 9:23 AM I replied from Chicago Jack Ellison March 9, 2015 at 10:18 AM Aha! The Windy City! Is that true?

Tim Smith March 9, 2015 at 8:49 AM You can come over this way we are hitting the 50's today....not the year so leave the black patton shoes at home. Jack Ellison March 9, 2015 at 8:56 AM Are you in Florida??? LOL We're "warming" up too... almost 40!!!