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Outside the Sea

The wind blows in through the palms from the East Sea. The turtle doves and humming birds scatter like buckshot As the cows approach. In the rafters above, a hundred mice and their charges, too small to be seen, scurry away From the waking bats. Outside a man with a white stick preaches about injustice And how the world is wrong. Me? I’m just glad to be here, waiting for your perfume.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/20/2016 2:13:00 PM
Peter, my old mate, I could read your poetry all night! I cannot precisely point to the reason why but perhaps it is because it is so entrenched in "real" every day events. You have a dry, laconic, "stood apart from it all" approach that quite frankly is completely enthralling...to say the least. Keep writing, Pete, keep writing. My very best regards...And warmest wishes! :) john
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