Outside the Box ---For Chan

No use pretending to stars that seek
They seem to know where genius sleeps

I hear the sound, but not of harps. Instead the angels play guitar,
I hear them tap their feet to rock, and shake the world below
Like something out of Star Wars...... outside the box
We've been out-foxed. We weren't prepared, to say goodbye just yet

No use pretending to the pitch of sleep
that we can squeeze each puzzle piece, to fit within our boxed-in dream
We were not prepared with lamp or light, to be awake to genius minds
But if we could bring our dreams alive,  we'd  think outside the closed-box mind
We would have to think, The Rhymer's dream, ...and set the box aside

Our brother could...., while no one would
The "geek",  some say, is still inside our open minds
The "geek" I think, is still alive, 
in each and every archive of where the soul survives
In  pentagrams, each token. kind, a euphoric open mind
In optical illusions, akin to Tolkien's prime
A clipping ripped from headlines, he somehow made it fit
the scheme of things, within a frame,  yet still not box him in?
To paste, and form the change of pace, until we're torn in two
then re-arranged, stir common sense, and change our point of view
The artistry he kept alive, is genius we all seek......he lit the torch, and reached the peak
that we may never touch
He lit the torch, and made us think, a bit......outside the box




In Honor Of Chan
For Cyndi 11/10/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/20/2014 7:22:00 PM
a great tribute to Chan i wish I'd had the chance to get to know him better:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/13/2014 7:18:00 PM
He sure did make folks think, and smile and on occasion really stir things up, and say sorry when needed, only the great can say sorry & mean it. Happy Holy Days. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:48:00 AM
I like your dedication in honour of Chan Carrie,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 11/22/2014 12:00:00 PM
:D and :( oh, Carrie, like Ruben said, I keep reading these and I am wonderstruck at how each person has captured an essence of him, found a way to pay a tribute in a very real and unique way. You have done this. Love it... outside the box, YES! xoxox Cyndi
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Date: 11/12/2014 8:38:00 AM
touching murmurs for chan, carrie... yes, he lit the torch for us... huggs
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