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Outside My Window

Outside My Window I sit on Dad's heavenly bed as I pen this write The mournful heart looks outside The window which for the moment is mine I view with his eyes and the heart inflates The orchard is blooming ready for fruiting, but The hedges look wild while lawn's not mowed His cane chair is empty while mother is beside The newspaper lies folded on the tea-tray with specs The tangerines in pots dangling near to death None to tell my brooding dear mother 'Preserve them in bottles before the season is out'. FOURTH Balveen Cheema September 12, 2015 Contest: Outside My Window Sponsor: Bev Smith

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Date: 1/4/2016 5:46:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work with this great poem..I can feel the emotion and pain..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/4/2016 6:35:00 AM
Sara, how kind of you to visit my page! Thanks & good wishes...
Date: 9/30/2015 1:39:00 PM
Heartfelt sad write, well done.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/30/2015 1:58:00 PM
Thanks James! Happier because it touched you. Regards, Balveen
Date: 9/29/2015 5:15:00 AM
Well done xxx congrats xx wendy
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/29/2015 5:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much Wendy!
Date: 9/28/2015 11:42:00 PM
Very wonderful take on the theme Balveen! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/10/2015 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 9/28/2015 11:00:00 PM
Balveen, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/8/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat!
Date: 9/28/2015 10:10:00 PM
Heartfelt and deserving win Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/29/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thanks Michael!

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