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outside dime store kids sharing bag of spearmint leaves posted on July 3, 2018

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Mick Talbot

Date: 7/4/2018 5:48:00 AM

senryu comment: ........................to give up................ .............................................not a good virtue.......... ...............................................forced swallow............... .......................................................................................... .....................................to perpetuate.................. ...........................misconceived ideas is wrong........................ ..................................you know it's true.............................. With the greatest, greatest respect, Mick

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/4/2018 6:46:00 AM

Thanks, Mick. I love to inspire others. SoupMail. LOL Line xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 7/3/2018 9:06:00 PM

This is excellent. A Fav.I posted a new poem. I am trying a new style. Looking forward to your opinion.