Outlaw

Odious transgressor,
Often wearing face masks.
Objective - get money.
Ominous demeanor,
Offensive behavior,
Out maneuvers the law.
Ostracized by good folk.

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Linda Alice Fowler

August 2, 2023 at 7:29 AM

Nicely done Kim! :)

Kim Merryman

August 5, 2023 at 7:28 PM

Thank you, Linda!

Mike Gentile

July 29, 2023 at 6:47 AM

Kim, I had not known this form! Terrific poem, makes me want to try one! Well done! Happy Saturday !!

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:39 PM

Thank you, Mike!

Sotto Poet

July 29, 2023 at 6:17 AM

An exquisitely detailed masterpiece delving into the intricate lives of those individuals who cunningly exploit others for their sustenance, while avoiding any form of productive labor.

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:38 PM

Thank you, Sotto!

Christuraj Alex

July 29, 2023 at 2:24 AM

A short, yet, detailed discussion on the Outlaw in the form of Pleiades. I should remind you at this juncture that I first learned this beautiful form through you. Thank you and congratulations!

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:38 PM

Thank you, Christuraj! I remember starting those alphabet Pleiades contests. They were fun!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

July 29, 2023 at 12:10 AM

Thank you Kim. Congratulations too on your win wirh this nice poem. Very true. Hugs!

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:37 PM

Thank you, Maria!

Jerry Brotherton

July 28, 2023 at 5:45 AM

Well done. Wouldn't it be nice if we could tell who the outlaws are because they always wear black? Like the old TV shows.

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:36 PM

It sure would. Thank you, Jerry!

Suzette Richards

July 28, 2023 at 2:04 AM

You nailed the perception of the outlaw, Kim.

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:36 PM

Thank you, Suzette!

Gershon Wolf

July 27, 2023 at 7:55 PM

As they jest: At least the outlaw is 'wanted!' ~ In-law... Nicely penned, Kim!

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:35 PM

Ha!ha! Thank you, Gershon!

Vineeth Shetty

July 27, 2023 at 6:37 PM

That's a good description about my ol' FRIEND. Well penned.

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:35 PM

Thank you, Vineeth!

Yann Rolland

July 27, 2023 at 5:15 PM

some people are "evil", we have to care, thanks for the interesting poem

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:34 PM

Thank you, Yann!

Sara Kendrick

July 27, 2023 at 1:24 PM

Very descriptive work about that person/s who try to live off of others without working. Thanks for sharing this very interesting work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Merryman

August 1, 2023 at 7:34 PM

Thank you, Sara!