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Outer Space:A Dreamer's Dream

Stars in my midst Jupiter my pillow Earth my footstool Dreams yet unshattered High above the clouds I'm limitless and talented Comets my bedtime story The sun my alarm clock Mars my breakfast, lunch, and dinner I'm living in outer space And loving how it feels Pluto and Uranus my distant brothers Venus my mother And Mercury, my sister The possibilities are endless All you have to do is dream Dream high and big Higher than people will ever think to imagine The Milky Way my home And as I awake from this dream I know that's where I belong

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
A mighty ambitious dream. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:57:00 PM
This is very imaginative!! I really like it. And congratulations, Jasmine. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Jasmine
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jasmine in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:54:00 PM
Congrats Jasmine on your super win in BG's contest with this great piece... enjoy your win today with luv..
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:36:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem very much..congrats on placing in my contest. BG
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Date: 6/7/2010 9:51:00 PM
lol funn write,, in out sleep is surely our one escape lol,enjoyed...p.d.
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