Outcast

a lone grey wolf banished from the pack; an outcast roaming the vast Arctic tundra in search of prey and another pack to belong to. encountering polar bears; it's a struggle for survival in the harsh elements. Writing Challenge - O words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme of choice: Outcast Syllables checked at HMS Date written: 03/25/2023

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2023 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations, Edward! Enjoyed!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/28/2023 2:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2023 10:21:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations Edward, well deserved :) - hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 12:34:00 PM

Thanks again, Anne-Lise:-)

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2023 9:21:00 PM

Back to your poem with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Edward

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 2:35:00 AM

Thanks again, Valsa:-)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/26/2023 1:01:00 PM

Very nicely written Edward. Love the wolf theme. They are fascinating creatures. Congratulations on your win!:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 2:35:00 AM

Thank you very much, Linda:-)

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2023 12:31:00 PM

Edward, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your wonderful poem. I love this form, always difficult to make that last line fit, and you did it, blessings, Constance

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 2:34:00 AM

Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Constance:-) Blessings to you, too!

Valsa George

Date: 3/26/2023 8:30:00 AM

When banished from the pack, everyone will become an outcast. To belong to a group is a desire and an urge in everyone. This is the case with man and beast. Love the way you have done justice to the topic. All the Best Edward !

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 2:33:00 AM

Thank you very much for the awesome feedback and visit, Valsa:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2023 3:18:00 AM

- Always a fight to survive, great writing :) - best wishes in the contest, Edward :) - hugs

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/27/2023 2:33:00 AM

Thank you very much, Anne-Lise:-)