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Out the Window

OUT THE WINDOW Writing at table An ordinary day with nothing to do but dream A detachment (as so often happens) takes hazy form AND I’m casually out the window Sensing something extra out there Not mysterious A simple fact of existence Infiltrating of and through everything! The roses sense its presence color-up Birds fly through it because of it This presence making eyes of surroundings Pressing Inviting Becoming one Lifting Dancing the mind Enveloping shoulders heart Now it dusts my tiny room thrills the veins shimmers the hair As it looks back at me through my window “What is reality?” my pen is writing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/3/2011 7:28:00 PM
I love your style of writing very creative and quite pleasing to the reader.. I like the random spaces, wonderful poem. now I am going to part 2 ~~
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Date: 5/28/2011 10:39:00 AM
thank you daver for commenting on clouds bursting open.
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Date: 5/27/2011 4:53:00 PM
A beautiful write, Daver! Perhaps your own reflection looking back you through your window? You, but with the intellectual and spirtual tones of a renaissance man. Love the quiet but streaming imagery. Thanks for the comment...I can't seem to write, if I were playing a musical instument..I'd be playing the jews harp...poing poing poing. Oh well..best wishes!! Love, Mikki
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:13:00 PM
Could be dust mites yer seeing sir ! *smiles*, just kind'n Dave, lol....it appears to be the zepher...although the sun, so speaking, can dust your lil' room ! Great write dear poet ! Got me think'n...have a great extended weekend sir !...much love, james
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Date: 5/27/2011 12:44:00 PM
yes very creative piece of fine work Daver.
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Date: 5/27/2011 12:00:00 AM
* “Smile * Going Spiritual & Escaping The Bonds of Flesh * Tis Is What I Somehow See * My Dear Gifted Daver. * Also I Find Escape Amid Ones Pen * Creating Ones Reality Amid This Detachment of Tangibles Tides * Very Wonderful Painting * Lovely. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
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Date: 5/26/2011 1:55:00 PM
oooh. This is so creative. And just what IS reality then? Good question to ask at the end of this delightful poem, Daver!
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:52:00 AM
I am sitting here reading some very amazing poems today Daver. I am glad yours was among them. Have a wonderful day full of love and joy. Love, Carol
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