Out the Back Door

Grey skies in March
as I walk through
the littered yard.
The grass is brown.
No one sees me
except the man
across the alley
loading scrap
into his pick-up.
We talk weather—
snow two days ago
today mist and rain
while we bear 
the weight of our lives.
He says he’s laid off
but hopes to return soon.
I talk about lost love
and an empty heart.
We agree we want
to reclaim our lives—
the calendar says spring.
A heavy piece of metal
thrown thuds unto his truck
and he says
Another day another dollar.
I say
All the world’s a stage
before I hop into my car
but no one else is around.
On a quiet morning
bare trees near the ravine
at the end of the alley
raise their weary arms.
I allow a moment to watch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/27/2025 4:59:00 PM
I found your poem very interesting. Bare trees raising their arms has such a connection to the subject (person) in this verse. It is an amazing work.
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Date: 3/23/2025 9:40:00 PM
Your poetry always resonates with me. You speak to the common people.
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