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The forsythia is not as full of blooms as this one because it has tried to bloom out since December..

Chartreuse tassels hang quiet, still Birds joyfully sing love's song Roosters' melodies fill the hollow Each greet spring gone so long Charcoal clouds ruffled across blue Cobalt could bring a shower Wash golden forsythia's blooms Loaded with blossom power The still air loaded with pollen Each plant seeking a mate Some falling upon car and barn Missed wind's transport to date An egg yolk sun peeks through cobalt Will it shine the whole day Is there rain in those early clouds Let joy exude come what may

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/19/2016 11:59:00 PM

Not sure where my mind was at, Sarah. "Chartreuse" is not a word I hear often, and in fact the first time I heard it was in Silent's "Colourification Contest" ... so that's probably why I had contests in mind. Silly me!

Red Fiery

Date: 3/19/2016 8:08:00 AM

This is so beautifully written .... You have mesmerized your readers here with your words... Marvellous write!!!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2016 8:09:00 AM

We had a sprinkling of rain last night which should have cleared the air some..Such a wonderful feel to the air now..I shall go out on the portico and see if inspiration flows..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2016 7:38:00 AM

- Every day we can see that spring is coming now - a beautiful poem, Sara - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2016 8:28:00 AM

Wonderful that you feel that spring is coming for it gives us hope..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/19/2016 12:14:00 AM

Hello Sara ... you've painted a lovely picture with words in a serene setting - thank you - Lindsay

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you for the uplifting comment..Spring is lovely..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2016 10:00:00 PM

very nice. I really liked the egg yolk sun line!!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/19/2016 6:53:00 AM

That beautiful deep golden sun was nice..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/18/2016 4:18:00 PM

A homely farm scene with the egg yolk sun and the rooster melodies. Cool how you exalted the beauty of nature instead, in this poem ... most others I've read went in the Romance direction.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2016 5:02:00 PM

I did not write this one with a contest in mind..I just like to write these when I can..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Lu Loo

Date: 3/18/2016 1:20:00 PM

Sara, lovely poem..:)-luloo

Constance La France

Date: 3/18/2016 11:06:00 AM

Sara, such a winsome poem, makes me want spring so much, wonderful and I am loving this 7 ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2016 11:35:00 AM

Sorry I meant the below for Paul's comment..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad spring has sprung but it is suppose to drop back down this week end with frost we won't know until afterwards if it comes and if it does what damage it brings..My husband has tomatoes planted..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2016 11:33:00 AM

I use a lot of archaic words..Once in the US it was used to mean a porch..Words gone from the language but are still a word..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2016 10:05:00 AM

In Maltese a 'piazza' is a square; I take yours as meaning a veranda...watching the beauty of spring, listening to birds singing; lovely imagery. Spring showers would be most welcome in Malta! ~ regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2016 11:33:00 AM

I use a lot of archaic words..Once in the US it was used to mean a porch..Words gone from the language but are still a word..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara