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Out of Water

It was just another story, my grandmother told
I wish I had known, what I've learned since then
How the dust from the hills swept over the plains
and how months without rain, would change everything.

Out of water, had been no worry
Until it changed their life, back then, 
It was how she met the man
It is partly her own story
It is part of who I am

I can see it all so clearly, 
How they paid a price, so dearly,
She was Kansas born and bred,
They had built a life securely
staking everything they owned
on a home, on a life, in the loam.

Short of water, was the motto
It had changed her life, back then, 
It was how she met her man
It is part of her old memories
It is part of who I am

On the homestead, growing barley, 
growing wheat, and corn, and kids
Sharing love she had for family
but the drought had come instead.
No water for their crops, no feed to fill the stock
The hardship and the illness
And drought upon the hills
No coin the pay the bills.....meager water in the pail

Quivering trees, and stiff shocks of corn
Withering slowly, from the winds
Sandstorms covered scores
of farmland till the end
Her husband growing ill
A grave dug in the sand
Out west, another land
No man to hold her hand
 
In the west they found the water
It had changed her life, back then, 
It was how she met her man
It is partly her own story
It is part of who I am



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2/21/15
"Out of Water" Contest: Sponsored By Sheri Fresonke Harper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Alexandropoulou Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. though your verse is free, it is a highly musical piece, a novel in lyrics.
Chutani Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 12:07 AM
nice personal touch to your poem, Carrie. seems like lyrics of a folk song. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win and a 7 and a fav. Have a wonderful Easter Sunday
Richards Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Wishing you a beautiful Easter as well !! :) and thank you for your many kind comments, always so appreciated and never overlooked. God Bless and Happy Easter!
Haight Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win for your personal historical accounting delivered in your poem of this horrible time in history. So wonderfully written! Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much for your continued support, Sandra, and wishing you and your family a blessed Easter! Thanks for your kindness!
Lawless Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:42 PM
Carrie, this is a painful reminder of a torturous time in the US. The Dust Bowl God it must have been horrible. This is beautifully written, the repetition of the chorus like stanzas adds to the impact. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Harper Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Carrie, thanks for digging into your family history, good strong details. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 6:37 PM
goodness, what great writing for this contest, Carrie. I think mine was just a mere limerick. You really raised the bar!Love how it has stanzas like a song.
La France Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Carrie, wow, what an awesome write for the contest, as usual you deliver, its fantastic and thanks so much for visiting my poetry today . . .
Merryman Avatar
February 21, 2015 at 8:24 PM
Carrie, this is FANTASTIC!!! Your writing made this historical event come alive. I enjoyed this very much! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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