Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Out of Tune

i toy with the line between love and despair
i sway like a fool to and fro
i dance to melodies dark blue in mid-air

for me there's no ray of sun or moon
so here i dangle in limbo
somewhat like an old piano out of tune



AP: 3rd place 2022

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Caren Krutsinger October 17, 2022 at 12:50 PM Still sounds like grief which lasts for a long time and ebbs and flows "so here i dangle in limbo" at the most unexpected and inopportune times Line. Line Gauthier October 17, 2022 at 3:11 PM Thanks, Caren for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Bill Baker October 8, 2022 at 3:41 PM Wonderful image, old piano out of tune. Nice entry for the contest, Line. Good luck my friend. Bill Line Gauthier October 17, 2022 at 3:11 PM Thank you very much, Bill ~

Quoth Theraven October 8, 2022 at 12:13 PM Line, There's a wonderful truth; a fitful presence in this poem 'out of tune'. -Richard Line Gauthier October 8, 2022 at 12:23 PM Thanks you so much, Richard. Most appreciated ~

Mystic Rose Rose October 8, 2022 at 11:20 AM deep down inside you there is a harmony of old that will keep pace with your many moods, I love your poetry Line Line Gauthier October 8, 2022 at 12:22 PM Thank you so much for the lovely message, Rose ~