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i toy with the line between love and despair i sway like a fool to and fro i dance to melodies dark blue in mid-air for me there's no ray of sun or moon so here i dangle in limbo somewhat like an old piano out of tune AP: 3rd place 2022 Posted on October 8, 2022

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Date: 10/17/2022 12:50:00 PM
Still sounds like grief which lasts for a long time and ebbs and flows "so here i dangle in limbo" at the most unexpected and inopportune times Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2022 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Caren for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/8/2022 3:41:00 PM
Wonderful image, old piano out of tune. Nice entry for the contest, Line. Good luck my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/17/2022 3:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Bill ~
Date: 10/8/2022 12:13:00 PM
Line, There's a wonderful truth; a fitful presence in this poem 'out of tune'. -Richard
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Date: 10/8/2022 12:23:00 PM
Thanks you so much, Richard. Most appreciated ~
Date: 10/8/2022 11:20:00 AM
deep down inside you there is a harmony of old that will keep pace with your many moods, I love your poetry Line
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Date: 10/8/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for the lovely message, Rose ~

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