Out of the Mouth of Babes

Nobody’s made me out a fool
Like three year olds in Sunday School.
One day I thought I’d sound real wise
And asked, “Who here likes butterflies?”

All hands shot quickly to the sky,
“I saw a yellow butterfly!”
“They eat the nectar from the flowers.”
These kids, I swear, had super powers!

“Bees turn nectar into honey,
The bee guy sells it for his money!” 
“My cousin’s mom got stung last week!”
“But honey’s good, its really sweet!”

“Chocolate’s sweet, it causes wrecks!”
“Mama says its better than sex!”
“Six is my favorite number today!
Today’s my cousin’s sixth birthday!”

Like butterflies from flower to flower
Their comments wandered for an hour
From butterflies and honey bees
To birds and squirrels in the trees.

Then Airplanes, clouds and astronauts.
“And ants live in the parking lot!”
I’ve been to college; three degrees!
Sometimes I wish that I were three.



July 7, 2017
For the “Three year olds thoughts” Contest
Sponsored by:  Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/24/2017 9:46:00 AM
Wonderful way to give this a different perspective. Nice job, Dean and congratulations.
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/24/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Dan. With some contests you have to be a little creative or they all sound the same. Thanks for stopping to comments. Dean
Date: 7/23/2017 9:21:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Dean great job ~*
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Dean Wood
Date: 7/24/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Eve. You are always so supportive.
Date: 7/23/2017 4:14:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 7/23/2017 3:02:00 PM
So cute and well-written, Dean! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thanks again Janice.
Date: 7/19/2017 1:19:00 PM
Fabulous poem. Adults are partly corrupted from the pressure and competition to earn a living.
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Date: 7/24/2017 12:41:00 PM
Thank you Hannah. Wouldn't it be nice if could all retain that child-like innocence?
Date: 7/19/2017 4:13:00 AM
This is such a sweet poem and a wonderful example of how rewarding it is to be a teacher or anyone who has the joy of raising a child. My granddaughter 5yrs. had a shirt on that read "You are my dream". She said to me "Grammie did you know you are My dream?" I said no, I didn't know that. Then she thought and said "Grandpa's my nightmare! After laughing my head off I said why? She said she was upset because he raised his voice at her earlier. I loved this entry Dean! : )
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:59:00 AM
Lol This is funny. Sometimes up grandpa's forget how young the grand kids are and that we aren't the ones who need to correct every misbehavior. Best to just love 'em and stay out of their nightmares! Thanks for this Connie, made me smile!
Date: 7/18/2017 10:29:00 PM
hahaha... this is so cute and so true,,, out of the mouths of babes truth comes out. Good luck in the contest~*
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Date: 7/19/2017 7:57:00 AM
Aren't they fun! Glad you enjoyed this one Eve, and thank you for taking time to read and comment. - Dean
Date: 7/18/2017 8:32:00 AM
Hah, that's just awesome Dean. It rhymes, it entertains, what else would I want. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:03:00 PM
haha, glad you enjoyed it Darren. This is based on real life experience. 3 year olds are great!
Date: 7/17/2017 6:19:00 PM
This is an entertaining read and so well done for the contest Dean :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, Three is a wonderful age!
Date: 7/17/2017 5:26:00 PM
I love this. I can hear it. But I feel your pain. They almost sound like adults these days!
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:05:00 PM
Aren't the smart! You can tell the kids who have engaged parents! Amazing what comes out of those little people!
Date: 7/17/2017 5:19:00 PM
This made me happy with memories.
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:06:00 PM
So glad. It was fun to write this one! - Dean
Date: 7/17/2017 5:11:00 PM
oh this is so cute Dean what a fun poem:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/18/2017 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Jan! Glad you enjoyed it. I sure had fun with it. - Dean
Date: 7/17/2017 4:45:00 PM
Love it, Dean!
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Date: 7/17/2017 4:47:00 PM
hehe, kids really do say the darnedest things. Thanks Kim!
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