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Out of Space

in the hazy dawn as the sun shines bright at the other end words dance in my restless mind like a happy crowd of daffodils and as i open my precious box of fragrant remembrance past gathering the tenderness buried so long under forgotten wounds, lulled by the same melodies that prompt renewed dreams while the even, dull pace of every day hinders my imaginary travels i strive to engrave with my bare hands the cherished moments when paradise seems within reach thus coming back once again on the road where we met my feelings hidden in memories now so deep in focus as we walk together on the streets in another city under another season fulfilling an endless wish vision of another world, revisited.

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Date: 4/6/2011 10:22:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Mai. I hope to get back soon to read more. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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