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Out Of School

Out of school~it is summertime,
we can swim~run and climb.
Cook outs are the very best,
love the cold watermelon in the ice chest.
Date Written:6/24/2022
Bite Size Poem no 48 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 6/27/2022 9:46:00 AM
Hi Paula, a fun poem, makes me wish I was young again, thank you. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Oh yes, to be young again and to know what I know now. Have a great/blessed week writing away...........
Date: 6/27/2022 7:58:00 AM
Yeah, vacations are the best but i do miss schools sometimes. But now as my schools are started i am cribbing for holidays...Great write Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:07:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed week writing away...........
Date: 6/27/2022 5:31:00 AM
Slice of Watermelon would be nice, quite warm here today..Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:06:00 PM
Thanks for your note. It would be nice to talk with some cold watermelon. Have a great/blessed week writing away...........
Date: 6/26/2022 6:49:00 PM
I love this, Paula, although I think you're writing about the over-50's. After all, the 'younger set' looks at it as an opportunity to be on their smartphones 24/7. Yuk. :) gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:05:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love this write. It is for All Ages. You are so right about the kids an their "smartphones 24/7. Yuk." Have a great/blessed week writing away...........
Date: 6/26/2022 11:39:00 AM
Paula, this makes me want to jump up and grab my things! Memories of my mother, calling out get ready we're going to the beach! Great for the bite size! Happy Sunday!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad I could take you back to some good memories with this write. I am ready for the beach. Let's go. Hahahah!!! Have a great/blessed week writing away...........
Date: 6/26/2022 9:56:00 AM
Children plan their holiday schedule with much enthusiasm ! I am taken back to my childhood days by your sweet poem.All the best in the contest... Love and hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2022 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad I could take you back to your childhood days with this write. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away...........
Date: 6/25/2022 4:43:00 AM
Paula, such lovely thoughts and images of summer here! Good luck in the contest Happy Saturday xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2022 1:56:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Yes, Summer is here. Hooray!!! Happy Saturday to you. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away...........