Out of My Dreams

When my thoughts start this song
It feels like a slow moving train,
Becoming from two tracks a single one
Much like the trickle from the drops of rain.
How shall I begin to let you in?
To a LOVE that echoes again
Across the distance that intervenes.
In my daze my words are a maze
I pray for God's LOVE that saves
With you coming straight out of my dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 7/19/2011 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful Raphael. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Raphael Smith
Date: 7/19/2011 9:54:00 PM
Thank you much...I am just here and do not understand how I won...but thanks...LOL!!! I love this site and all of you!!!
Date: 7/19/2011 8:22:00 AM
congratulations Raphael on your great win
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Raphael Smith
Date: 7/19/2011 9:55:00 PM
Thank you Robert, I am unsure how this all works but I thank you!!!
Date: 7/19/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on 1st Place, Raphael. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/19/2011 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, I like your name...and I look forward to reading your work as well.
Date: 7/19/2011 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations Raphael on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 11:07:00 PM
sweetest of cheers to you for the top win, raphael! :)huggs!
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Date: 7/18/2011 10:19:00 PM
Very nice Raphael. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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