Raphael Smith Poet Free verse

Out of My Dreams

When my thoughts start this song
It feels like a slow moving train,
Becoming from two tracks a single one
Much like the trickle from the drops of rain.
How shall I begin to let you in?
To a LOVE that echoes again
Across the distance that intervenes.
In my daze my words are a maze
I pray for God's LOVE that saves
With you coming straight out of my dreams.

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Elaine George July 19, 2011 at 4:47 PM Beautiful Raphael. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie Raphael Smith July 19, 2011 at 9:54 PM Thank you much...I am just here and do not understand how I won...but thanks...LOL!!! I love this site and all of you!!!

Robert A. Dufresne July 19, 2011 at 8:22 AM congratulations Raphael on your great win Raphael Smith July 19, 2011 at 9:55 PM Thank you Robert, I am unsure how this all works but I thank you!!!

Ralph Taylor July 19, 2011 at 6:54 AM Congrats on 1st Place, Raphael. Nice going. Ralph Raphael Smith July 19, 2011 at 9:56 PM Thanks Ralph, I like your name...and I look forward to reading your work as well.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 5:46 AM Congratulations Raphael on your win in Brian Strand's "Poesy"contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2011 at 11:07 PM sweetest of cheers to you for the top win, raphael! :)huggs!

Joyce Johnson July 18, 2011 at 10:19 PM Very nice Raphael. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce